Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi chính tả như 'train' thay vì 'town' hoặc 'place', 'sweet' thay vì 'sweat'.

例: The weather in my town depends on the seasons. For example, summers are very hot and sunny. I don't like summer because I sweat a lot.

提案: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng có thể thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn và dùng từ vựng phong phú hơn. Hãy tránh dùng từ chung chung như 'very wonderful' và thay bằng từ cụ thể hơn.

例: I really like cold weather because I can wear my favorite hoodies and enjoy hot pot with my friends, which makes the experience cozy and enjoyable.

提案: Câu trả lời cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để câu rõ ràng hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi như 'makes the floor is slippery' và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh hơn.

例: I prefer dry and bright weather because wet weather makes the floor slippery, which can cause me to fall when I play basketball.

提案: Câu trả lời cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, 'in every morning' nên là 'every morning' và thêm 'the' trước 'forecast'.

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning because it helps me prepare necessary things. For example, when the forecast says it will rain, I bring my umbrella.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: In recent years, the effects of climate change have been very serious. For example, I have noticed that storms happen more often, and many houses have been damaged.

提案: Câu trả lời cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ như 'where where'. Bạn nên dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phong phú hơn.

例: Yes, I would like to visit Japan, which has snow. I can play in the snow with my friends, and I think it would be very exciting.

× The weather where it is train rely on the seasons.

✓ The weather where I live depends on the seasons.

The original sentence has incorrect verb usage and subject reference. 'It is train' is incorrect and 'rely' should be 'depends' to agree with singular subject 'weather'. The correct subject is 'I live' to indicate location. Use present tense 'depends' for general truths.

× I hate summer because it makes me sweet too much.

✓ I hate summer because it makes me sweat too much.

The word 'sweet' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'sweat' (to perspire). This is a vocabulary error, not grammar, but correcting it improves clarity.

× when weather is wet it makes the floor is slippery.

✓ when the weather is wet, it makes the floor slippery.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'makes the floor is slippery'. The correct structure is 'makes the floor slippery' without 'is'. Also, 'the' is needed before 'weather'.

× That make me fall when I play basketball in the court.

✓ That makes me fall when I play basketball on the court.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'That' is singular, so verb should be 'makes'. Also, preposition 'in' should be 'on' for 'the court'.

× I usually check the weather forecast in every morning because it helps me prepare necessary things.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast every morning because it helps me prepare necessary things.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect before 'every morning'. The correct phrase is 'every morning' without 'in'.

× when forecast is rainy, I can bring my umbrella.

✓ when the forecast is rainy, I can bring my umbrella.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'forecast' to specify the particular forecast being referred to.

× the effects of climate change is really serious.

✓ the effects of climate change are really serious.

'Effects' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× I witnessed the frequency of storm is happen more it make my it make a lot of house are broke.

✓ I have witnessed that the frequency of storms has increased; it has caused many houses to be broken.

The original sentence has multiple tense and structure errors. Use present perfect 'have witnessed' for recent experience, 'frequency of storms has increased' for present perfect, and correct passive structure 'houses to be broken'. Also, plural 'storms' and 'houses' are needed.

× Yes, certainly I would like to visit Japan where where have snow.

✓ Yes, certainly I would like to visit Japan where there is snow.

The phrase 'where where have snow' is incorrect. The correct form is 'where there is snow' using 'there is' to indicate existence.

× I can play with snow with my friend.

✓ I can play with snow with my friend.

This sentence is grammatically correct but 'friend' should be plural 'friends' if referring to more than one friend. If singular, it is acceptable.