Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более естественным и структурированным. Следует прямо ответить на вопрос, описать погоду и добавить конкретные детали, избегая повторений и грамматических ошибок.

例: The weather in Kazakhstan is mostly sunny and dry. I enjoy sunny days because they make me feel happy and energetic. For example, I like to go for walks when the sun is shining.

提案: Ответ должен быть более связным и грамматически правильным. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и конкретные детали для поддержки мнения.

例: I prefer cold weather because it feels refreshing, especially after staying indoors for a long time. For example, I enjoy wearing cozy clothes and drinking hot berry tea on cold days.

提案: Ответ содержит ошибки и неясности. Следует четко выразить предпочтение, использовать правильную грамматику и привести конкретные причины.

例: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for outdoor activities. For example, it is easier to go outside and enjoy sports when the weather is dry.

提案: Ответ содержит ошибки и нечеткости. Следует использовать правильные выражения и грамматику, а также более подробно описать привычку.

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving the house to plan my day accordingly.

提案: Ответ неясен и не связан с вопросом. Нужно дать конкретный и связный ответ, описывающий последствия изменения климата с примерами.

例: Climate change has caused more extreme weather events, such as floods and droughts, which affect both the environment and people's lives.

提案: Ответ не отвечает на вопрос. Следует выразить желание посетить другие города с разным климатом и объяснить причины.

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, such as tropical places, to experience new weather and cultures.

× I like a sunny weather and I live in Kazakhstan.

✓ I like sunny weather and I live in Kazakhstan.

The word 'weather' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by the article 'a'. Using 'a' before uncountable nouns is incorrect. The correct form is 'sunny weather' without 'a'.

× Kazakhstan is beautiful and I like.

✓ Kazakhstan is beautiful and I like it.

The sentence is incomplete because the object of 'like' is missing. The pronoun 'it' is needed to complete the sentence and clarify what is liked.

× I prefer cold weather because it's feeling refreshing and energy things and especially after spending time indoors.

✓ I prefer cold weather because it feels refreshing and energizing, especially after spending time indoors.

The pronoun 'it' should be followed by the verb 'feels' in present tense, not 'feeling'. Also, 'energy things' is unclear and incorrect; 'energizing' is the correct adjective form to describe the effect.

× For example, I enjoy weather, cozy clothes and drinking hot berries which make cold day.

✓ For example, I enjoy the weather, cozy clothes, and drinking hot berry drinks which make cold days better.

The sentence lacks articles and proper quantifiers. 'The weather' is specific, and 'hot berries' is unclear; 'hot berry drinks' or 'hot berry tea' is more appropriate. Also, 'make cold day' should be pluralized to 'cold days'.

× I prefer dry is wet weather because it generally more comfortable and convenience for activities.

✓ I prefer dry weather to wet weather because it is generally more comfortable and convenient for activities.

The phrase 'dry is wet weather' is incorrect; the correct comparison is 'dry weather to wet weather'. Also, 'convenience' should be the adjective 'convenient'.

× For example, I wish it's easiest to go outside.

✓ For example, I think it's easier to go outside.

'I wish' is incorrect here; 'I think' or 'I find' is appropriate. Also, 'easiest' is superlative and should be 'easier' for comparison.

× Yes, I usually shake the weather for a cast forecast and the weather forecast every morning before leaving the house.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving the house.

The verb 'shake' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'check'. Also, 'for a cast forecast' is redundant and incorrect.

× American ears Climate change has had profound effects on the environment and society.

✓ In recent years, climate change has had profound effects on the environment and society.

The phrase 'American ears' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. The sentence should start with a time reference like 'In recent years' to answer the question properly.

× Firstly, we want which side more fight with.

✓ Firstly, we want to know which side is more affected by conflicts.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It needs restructuring to convey a clear meaning related to the effects of climate change.

× I live in Kazakhstan and Kazakhstan climate is good and beautiful city and I like Kazakhstan.

✓ I live in Kazakhstan. The climate in Kazakhstan is good and beautiful, and I like it here.

The original sentence is a run-on with incorrect structure. 'Kazakhstan climate' needs an article and proper phrasing. Also, 'Kazakhstan' is a country, not a city.