Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更直接描述天气状况，避免无关信息，并注意语法和表达的准确性。可以用更自然的句式描述季节特点。

例: The weather in my hometown is quite mild. Summers are warm but not too hot, and winters are cool without being very cold. Overall, the climate is comfortable throughout the year.

提案: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且语法错误较多。应明确表达偏好并给出合理原因，避免无意义的句子。

例: I prefer cold weather because I find it refreshing and it allows me to wear comfortable clothes. Also, I enjoy the crisp air during winter.

提案: 回答较为具体，但表达不够流畅，语法和用词需改进。建议用更自然的表达方式说明原因。

例: I prefer dry weather because when it's wet, clothes take a long time to dry and can develop an unpleasant smell. Dry weather is more comfortable for me.

提案: 回答不够连贯，部分表达不清晰。应直接回答问题并用连词连接句子，避免使用不恰当的词汇。

例: I don't usually check the weather forecast, but if I have important outdoor plans, I will check it to prepare accordingly.

提案: 回答内容相关但语法错误较多。应使用正确的时态和句式，表达观点时更具体。

例: In recent years, the weather has become warmer due to global warming. Pollution is a major cause, so I believe we must take action to protect the environment.

提案: 回答表达不清，逻辑混乱。应明确表达愿望并给出合理原因，避免无根据的说法。

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because experiencing new environments can be interesting and beneficial for health.

× The weather in the summer is not very hot, and in the winter is not very cold outside.

✓ The weather in the summer is not very hot, and in the winter it is not very cold outside.

句子中缺少主语“it”，导致句子结构不完整。英语中，描述天气时，通常使用“it is”结构。

× It's not like the spring.

✓ It's not like spring.

“the spring”中的定冠词“the”不必要，季节名词前通常不加冠词。

× It may be cold because in the cold weather I can realize clouds, so I don't need to wash too many clothes.

✓ It may be cold because in cold weather I can see clouds, so I don't need to wash too many clothes.

“can realize clouds”用词不当，应使用“can see clouds”表示“能看到云”。

× I think it's very tight.

✓ I think it's very convenient.

“tight”用法不当，表达意思不清，应使用“convenient”表示“方便”。

× Maybe dry because in wet weather and if you wash some clothes, your clothes cannot be very dry and it's a very bad smell about your clothes.

✓ Maybe dry because in wet weather, if you wash some clothes, your clothes cannot dry well and they have a very bad smell.

“cannot be very dry”表达不自然，应改为“cannot dry well”；“it's a very bad smell about your clothes”结构错误，应改为“they have a very bad smell”。

× No, not really, but if I need to do some important things in the outdoor I will check the weather, but if in my spare time or in my weekday I will not because I think it's very tribal for me.

✓ No, not really, but if I need to do some important things outdoors I will check the weather, but if in my spare time or on weekdays I will not because I think it's very trivial for me.

“in the outdoor”应为“outdoors”；“in my weekday”应为“on weekdays”；“tribal”用词错误，应为“trivial”，意为“琐碎的”。

× The weather be more and more warm and global, especially the pollution linked to the global warming, so I think we need to protect the environment.

✓ The weather is getting warmer and warmer globally, especially the pollution linked to global warming, so I think we need to protect the environment.

“The weather be”语法错误，应为“The weather is”；“more and more warm”表达不自然，应为“warmer and warmer”；“global”用作副词应为“globally”。

× Yes, of course, because I once heard about if you live a different city than the weather vary have a big difference, so you can be more tall or their skin will be better than before.

✓ Yes, of course, because I once heard that if you live in a different city where the weather varies a lot, you can grow taller or your skin will be better than before.

“heard about if”结构错误，应为“heard that”；“live a different city”缺少介词，应为“live in a different city”；“the weather vary have a big difference”语法错误，应为“the weather varies a lot”；“more tall”应为“taller”；“their skin”指代不明，应为“your skin”。