Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应注意语法时态的一致性和句子完整性，避免句子不完整或语法错误。可以使用更自然的表达方式描述天气，并且避免句子末尾不完整。

例: The weather in Hong Kong is mostly hot and humid. In summer, temperatures often reach around 31 degrees Celsius. However, winters are mild and not very cold.

提案: 回答时应注意用词准确，如“pan out”用法不当，应使用“go out”。同时，句子结构应更自然流畅，避免重复表达。

例: I prefer hot weather because I can go out and enjoy outdoor activities during the summer. Also, I like eating ice cream when it's hot. However, I also enjoy cold weather sometimes.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不完整。应注意句子通顺，避免直译中文表达。可以用更自然的表达方式说明原因。

例: I prefer dry weather because I don't like it when it rains all the time. Dry weather makes me feel more comfortable and I can go out with my friends.

提案: 回答中表达不够自然，句子结构不完整。应使用更地道的表达方式说明习惯和原因。

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning so that I know what to bring, like an umbrella or appropriate clothes.

提案: 回答中语法和词汇错误较多，表达不清晰。应使用正确的词汇和句子结构，清楚描述气候变化的影响。

例: In recent years, I think climate change has caused the weather to become hotter. Also, ice on islands is melting faster than before.

提案: 回答中表达稍显生硬，词汇使用不够准确。应使用更自然的表达方式，如“learn more about other cities”而非“know more”。

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I can learn more about them. It would also broaden my horizons, for example, visiting places like the UK or Australia.

× Definitely most of Hong Kong weather is hot and wet.

✓ Definitely most of Hong Kong's weather is hot and wet.

这里缺少了所有格，应该用 "Hong Kong's weather" 表示“香港的天气”，否则语法不正确。

× In summer, the temperature was very high at around 31st.

✓ In summer, the temperature was very high at around 31 degrees.

“31st” 是日期的表达方式，这里应该用温度单位“degrees”来表示温度。

× Moreover, in the winter, Hong Kong was not very cold but is very.

✓ Moreover, in the winter, Hong Kong is not very cold but is very humid.

句子时态不一致，描述冬天的天气应使用一般现在时；另外，句子不完整，缺少形容词，推测应为“humid”（潮湿）。

× I prefer hot weather, especially I can pan out and have an outdoor activity in the summer.

✓ I prefer hot weather, especially because I can hang out and have outdoor activities in the summer.

“pan out”用法错误，应为“hang out”表示“出去玩”；“have an outdoor activity”应改为复数“have outdoor activities”更自然。

× Moreover, I can eat a lot of ice cream in the hot weather.

✓ Moreover, I can eat a lot of ice cream in hot weather.

“the hot weather”前的定冠词“the”不必要，通常说“in hot weather”更自然。

× However, I like cold too.

✓ However, I like cold weather too.

“cold”作为名词时应加“weather”以明确意思。

× I prefer a dry weather because I don't like always raining weather is let me feel not comfortable.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I don't like rainy weather; it makes me feel uncomfortable.

“a dry weather”中“weather”是不可数名词，不用冠词；“always raining weather is let me feel not comfortable”结构混乱，应改为“rainy weather; it makes me feel uncomfortable”。

× I prefer a dry weather because I don't like always raining weather is let me feel not comfortable.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I don't like rainy weather; it makes me feel uncomfortable.

“always raining weather”表达不正确，应使用形容词“rainy”修饰“weather”；“let me feel not comfortable”语序错误，应为“makes me feel uncomfortable”。

× In dry weather I can go out with my friends.

✓ In dry weather, I can go out with my friends.

句子缺少逗号，增加逗号使句子更通顺。

× I always check the weather in the morning and I can have the sign what I need to bring such as umbrella or clothes.

✓ I always check the weather in the morning so I can know what I need to bring, such as an umbrella or clothes.

“have the sign what I need to bring”表达不正确，应改为“know what I need to bring”；“such as umbrella”前应加不定冠词“an”。

× such as umbrella or clothes.

✓ such as an umbrella or clothes.

“umbrella”是可数名词，单数前应加不定冠词“an”。

× In recent years I think there are climate change a lot.

✓ In recent years, I think there has been a lot of climate change.

“climate change”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“are climate change”；应使用“has been a lot of climate change”。

× The weather is becoming more hot and the island ice was faster to metal.

✓ The weather is becoming hotter and the island ice is melting faster.

“more hot”应改为比较级“hotter”；“was faster to metal”表达错误，应为“is melting faster”。

× The weather is becoming more hot and the island ice was faster to metal.

✓ The weather is becoming hotter and the island ice is melting faster.

“was faster to metal”时态错误，应使用现在进行时“is melting faster”。

× Yes, I'd like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because I can know more about another city.

✓ Yes, I'd like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because I can learn more about other cities.

“know more about another city”表达不自然，应改为“learn more about other cities”。

× Moreover, I can broaden my horizon for the other cities such as UK or Australia.

✓ Moreover, I can broaden my horizons by visiting other countries such as the UK or Australia.

“horizon”应使用复数形式“horizons”；“for the other cities”表达不当，应改为“by visiting other countries”；“UK”前应加定冠词“the”。