Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但部分表达不够正式，如“Bloody cold”和“gonna”。建议使用更正式的表达，并注意句子简洁，避免冗长。可以适当使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I live in Beijing, where the weather is usually very hot in summer and extremely cold in winter. For instance, summer days can be scorching, making it quite uncomfortable to stay outside for long.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“pray for the hot weather”不合适，且句子未完整。建议使用正确表达，句子完整且逻辑清晰。

例: I prefer hot weather to cold because it's easier to stay comfortable. For example, during hot days, I can stay indoors with air conditioning, which helps me cope better than in freezing winters.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误，如“go hiking”应为“going hiking”，且句子结尾不完整。建议注意动词形式和句子完整性。

例: I prefer dry weather because I enjoy outdoor activities such as swimming, hiking, and cycling. Dry conditions make it easier and more enjoyable to spend time outside.

提案: 回答较完整，但表达稍显重复，如“it is raining or it is like snowing”。建议简化表达，使用更自然的连接词。

例: Yes, I check the weather forecast almost every day because the weather in Beijing changes frequently, and unexpected rain or snow can cause problems.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，如“have a devastating effects”和句子未结束。建议注意语法一致性，句子完整，并提供具体例子。

例: I believe climate change has caused severe weather events recently. For example, there have been more frequent hurricanes, especially in coastal areas of China, which have caused significant damage.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“that has a quite different climates”和“I'm like outdoor person”。建议注意主谓一致和表达准确，句子更简洁。

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy outdoor activities. I prefer sunny and dry weather, especially near the sea, so I would love to experience such places.

× They have diverse changes in different seasons.

✓ There are diverse changes in different seasons.

这里主语应为复数形式的“changes”，但原句中使用了“they”，指代不明确，且句子结构不正确。应使用“There are”结构来表达“有多样的变化”。

× For example, in the summertime it's gonna be like scorching hot usually in the daytime, which can make you feel suffocated.

✓ For example, in the summertime it is usually scorching hot during the daytime, which can make you feel suffocated.

“gonna”是口语缩写形式，不适合正式表达，应使用“it is”。此外，“usually”位置应靠近动词，表达更准确。

× Well, I pray for the hot weather compared to the extremely cold times in winter in Beijing because I think hot weather is something that you can try to sustain and survive.

✓ Well, I prefer hot weather compared to the extremely cold times in winter in Beijing because I think hot weather is something that you can try to sustain and survive.

“pray for”意为“祈祷”，与表达喜好不符，应使用“prefer”表示“更喜欢”。

× For example, you can go to the inner doors with the air con conditioners and you can.

✓ For example, you can go indoors with the air conditioners and you can.

“inner doors”用法不当，应为“indoors”表示“室内”；“air con conditioners”重复，“air conditioners”即可。

× I prefer outdoor activities like swimming, go hiking or riding a bike, etcetera.

✓ I prefer outdoor activities like swimming, hiking, or riding a bike, etcetera.

在列举动词时，应保持形式一致，使用动名词形式（-ing），故“go hiking”应改为“hiking”。

× So having a dry weather is very suitable for me to go out, go outdoors and do the activities like that in.

✓ So having dry weather is very suitable for me to go out, go outdoors and do activities like that.

“weather”作为不可数名词，前面不加冠词“a”。此外，句尾“in”多余，应去掉。

× Well, I think the climate change definitely have a devastating effects on the weather right now, especially.

✓ Well, I think climate change definitely has devastating effects on the weather right now, especially.

“climate change”作为不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数“has”；“effects”复数时前面不加冠词“a”。

× For example, we can see a lot of some like natural disasters like hurricanes happen a lot this year, especially in the sea areas in China.

✓ For example, we can see many natural disasters like hurricanes happening a lot this year, especially in the sea areas in China.

“a lot of some”重复且不合适，应改为“many”；“happen”应改为现在分词“happening”以修饰前面的名词。

× Yes, of course I would like to visit other cities that has a quite different climates because I think I'm like outdoor person.

✓ Yes, of course I would like to visit other cities that have quite different climates because I think I'm an outdoor person.

“cities”复数，关系代词后谓语动词应用复数“have”；“a quite different climates”中“climates”复数前不加不定冠词“a”；“like outdoor person”缺冠词，应为“an outdoor person”。

× I mentioned before I prefer the weather is more sunny and more dry, especially the sea area.

✓ I mentioned before I prefer the weather to be sunnier and drier, especially in the sea area.

“prefer”后应接不定式结构“to be”；“more sunny”应用比较级“sunnier”；“more dry”应为“drier”；“especially the sea area”应加介词“in”。