Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时注意语法正确，如主谓一致（have应为has），并避免拼写错误（peace应为peaceful）。此外，回答可以更自然简洁，避免重复表达季节特点。

例: The city where I live has four distinct seasons. Spring is warm and pleasant, summer is hot, autumn is cool, and winter is cold.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“It’s only can be done”应为“It can only be done”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I prefer cold weather because I dislike sweating and feeling sticky. Also, I enjoy skiing, which can only be done in cold weather.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“the food are more convenient to contain”不明确。建议表达更具体，避免语法错误，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: Definitely, I prefer dry weather because I don't like feeling sticky. Also, food stays fresh longer in dry weather, which is more convenient.

提案: 注意语法错误，如“can helps”应为“can help”，并避免冗余表达。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并适当使用连接词。

例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning because it helps me decide what to wear and whether to take an umbrella.

提案: 句子结构不正确，如“makes it is”应改为“makes it”。建议使用更准确的表达，并提供更具体的细节。

例: Climate change has caused summers to become hotter and winters to get colder over recent years.

提案: 回答中语法错误明显，如“it have”应为“it has”，句子不完整。建议表达完整且连贯，使用连接词。

例: Yes, I would like to visit Shenzhen in my country because it has nearly eight months of summer each year.

× The city where I live have 4 distinctive seasons.

✓ The city where I live has 4 distinctive seasons.

主语是单数名词 city，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 has，而不是复数形式 have。

× In the spring it's warm and peace, in the summer it's hot, in the autumn it's very cool and in the winter it's very cold.

✓ In the spring it's warm and peaceful, in the summer it's hot, in the autumn it's very cool and in the winter it's very cold.

peace 是名词，形容天气应使用形容词 peaceful。

× It's only can be done in cold weather.

✓ It can only be done in cold weather.

情态动词 can 后面直接接动词原形，不能加助动词 is。

× The food are more convenient to contain in the dry weather.

✓ The food is more convenient to store in dry weather.

food 是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式 is；contain 用法不当，应改为 store（储存）。

× it can helps me to decide what I wear in that day and if I need to take an umbrella.

✓ it can help me decide what to wear that day and if I need to take an umbrella.

情态动词 can 后接动词原形 help，不能加 s；decide 后面不需要 to；what I wear 改为 what to wear 更自然。

× Climate change makes it is more and more hot in summer and colder and colder in winter.

✓ Climate change makes it hotter and hotter in summer and colder and colder in winter.

makes 后面不应接 it is，直接用形容词比较级 hotter 表达更准确。

× Yes, I want to visit Shenzhen in my country it have nearly. Eight months summer season in one year.

✓ Yes, I want to visit Shenzhen in my country. It has nearly eight months of summer season in one year.

主语 it 是单数，谓语动词应使用 has；句子应分开为两句；eight 首字母不应大写；summer season 前应加介词 of。