Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应注意语法准确性和表达的连贯性。例如，“below the zero”应为“below zero”，“they are always sunny and hot”应明确主语。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: The weather varies with the seasons. For example, in winter, temperatures usually drop below zero, so people wear warm clothes. In contrast, summers are sunny and hot, often reaching up to 40 degrees Celsius.

提案: 回答时应注意名词复数形式和冠词使用，如“various type”应为“various types”。建议增加连接词使表达更自然。

例: I prefer hot weather because in summer, I can wear various types of clothes like dresses and T-shirts. However, in winter, I have to wear heavy clothes to keep warm, which I find uncomfortable.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“more safer”应为“safer”，“basic disease”表达不清，“prefer drug”应为“prefer dry”。建议注意语法和词汇准确性。

例: I prefer dry weather because it is generally safer and better for our health. For example, elderly people often find it difficult to work in wet conditions due to their health problems. Therefore, I prefer dry weather.

提案: 回答中应注意冠词和词汇搭配，如“a indoor activities”应为“an indoor activity”。建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every evening. Based on the forecast, I decide what to wear the next day and plan my activities. For example, if it is going to rain tomorrow, I might cancel my swimming appointment and choose an indoor activity instead.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“temperature is almost reach”应为“temperature almost reaches”，“peaking at its peak peak”重复。建议使用更准确的表达和丰富细节。

例: I feel that summer temperatures have risen rapidly in recent years. In my hometown, the temperature often reaches up to 40 degrees Celsius at its peak, which is very uncomfortable.

提案: 回答中应注意冠词使用，如“the other city”应为“other cities”。建议增加连接词使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates. Since my hometown is very hot, with temperatures nearly 40 degrees, I want to find a cooler place to live. This would allow me to enjoy more outdoor activities like playing badminton and basketball.

× But in summer they are always sunny and hot.

✓ But in summer it is always sunny and hot.

这里的主语是'summer'，是单数，谓语动词和形容词应与单数主语一致，使用单数形式。

× Almost reached up 40.

✓ It almost reaches up to 40 degrees.

句子缺少主语，且动词形式不正确，应补充主语并使用正确的动词形式。

× I prefer hot because in summer you can try various type of clothes such as dress and the T-shirt,

✓ I prefer hot because in summer you can try various types of clothes such as dresses and T-shirts,

'type'应为复数'types'，'dress'和'T-shirt'也应使用复数形式。

× I prefer dry weather because it generally more safer and beneficial to our health condition.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it is generally safer and beneficial to our health condition.

句子中缺少动词'is'，且'safer'前不应加'more'，因为'safer'已经是比较级。

× Yes, I usually check weather forecast everyday evening.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every evening.

'everyday'是形容词，表示日常的，应使用副词短语'every evening'表示频率，且缺少定冠词'the'。

× Depending on the weather forecast, I can decide what I wear next day and arrange my activities.

✓ Depending on the weather forecast, I can decide what to wear the next day and arrange my activities.

'decide what I wear next day'结构不自然，应改为'decide what to wear the next day'。

× if tomorrow's weather is raining, I can cancel the swimming appointment and choose a indoor activities.

✓ If tomorrow's weather is rainy, I can cancel the swimming appointment and choose indoor activities.

'raining'应改为形容词'rainy'，'a indoor activities'中'a'与复数'nactivities'不匹配，应去掉'a'。

× The biggest feeling for me is the temperature in summer rise rapidly.

✓ The biggest feeling for me is that the temperature in summer rises rapidly.

主句和从句连接不完整，动词'rise'应加第三人称单数形式'rises'。

× As you know, in my hometown the temperature is almost reach up to 40° peeking at its peak peak.

✓ As you know, in my hometown the temperature almost reaches up to 40°, peaking at its peak.

'reach'应为第三人称单数形式'reaches'，'peeking'应为'peaking'，且重复了'peak'。

× Yes, I really want to visit the other city because, you know, my hometown is really hot and the temperature is nearly 40°.

✓ Yes, I really want to visit another city because, you know, my hometown is really hot and the temperature is nearly 40°.

'the other city'通常指两个中的另一个，若泛指应使用'another city'。

× I think I can increase some outdoor activities such as playing badminton and basketball.

✓ I think I can do more outdoor activities such as playing badminton and basketball.

'increase some outdoor activities'表达不自然，应改为'do more outdoor activities'。