Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apni answer e beshi clear topic sentence dite paren, ebong sentence gulo ke sohoje bujhte parar moto korte hobe. Apnar answer e kichu redundancy ache, ar kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke logically link korte, jemon 'because' er por clear karon deya. Apnar vocabulary o aro bhalo korte paren.

例: I prefer winter because the weather is comfortable for me. I do not like hot and sunny days as they make me feel uncomfortable. Therefore, winter is my favorite season.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar sentence gulo onek boro. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke choto korte, ebong linking words use kore answer ke logical banate. Apnar vocabulary aro boro korte paren, jemon 'convenient' er sathe 'pleasant' o use korte paren.

例: I prefer cold weather because it is more comfortable and pleasant for me. In cold weather, I can do my activities easily without any hesitation. However, hot weather makes things difficult for me.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu repetition ache, ar kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apni chesta korun linking words use korte, jemon 'because' er por specific karon deya. Apnar vocabulary aro boro korte paren, jemon 'outdoor activities' er bodole 'sports' use kora jete pare.

例: I prefer dry weather because I enjoy playing outdoor sports like cricket and football. When the weather is dry, I can easily play with my friends and family. That's why I like dry weather.

提案: Apnar answer e onek confusion ache, ar sentence gulo clear na. Apni chesta korun simple ebong clear sentence banate. Apnar answer e specific details dite paren, jemon koto bar check koren, kon device use koren. Linking words use korte hobe jate answer logical hoy.

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going outside. I do this almost every day to avoid getting wet in the rain. For example, if I don't check and it rains, I might get sick.

提案: Apnar answer e onek hesitation ar incomplete sentence ache. Apni chesta korun clear topic sentence dite, ebong supporting details logically link korte. Apnar vocabulary aro boro korte paren, ar sentence gulo ke complete korte hobe. Apni specific examples dite paren climate change er effect niye.

例: I think climate change has caused global warming and increased carbon emissions. It has also led to deforestation and harmed ecosystems. If we continue like this, the environment will get worse.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar sentence gulo onek boro. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke choto korte, ebong clear topic sentence dite. Apnar vocabulary aro boro korte paren, ar linking words use korte paren jate answer logical hoy.

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates to experience new weather. For example, I want to visit Saudi Arabia to feel hot weather. This experience would be very helpful for me.

× I didn't adjust the hot weather and whenever I face this moment, sunny days, actually I feel uncomfortable and that's the reason actually I love winter.

✓ I haven't adjusted to the hot weather and whenever I face sunny days, I actually feel uncomfortable and that's the reason I love winter.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the simple past tense 'didn't adjust' for a situation that is ongoing. The present perfect 'haven't adjusted' is appropriate to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Also, 'adjust' requires the preposition 'to' when referring to adapting to something.

× But in the hot season was really difficult for me.

✓ But the hot season was really difficult for me.

The original sentence is missing the subject 'the hot season' before the verb 'was'. Adding the subject corrects the sentence structure and clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer dry weather because whenever this weather is stayed, I can do many things from the outdoor like I love playing outdoor activities like cricket, football.

✓ I prefer dry weather because whenever this weather stays, I can do many things outdoors like playing cricket and football.

The phrase 'this weather is stayed' is incorrect; 'stays' is the correct verb form. Also, 'from the outdoor' is incorrect; 'outdoors' is the proper adverb to indicate outside activities. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× If the weather is dry I can easily play with my friends, families or relatives, others.

✓ If the weather is dry, I can easily play with my friends, family, relatives, and others.

The word 'families' should be singular 'family' when referring to a group related to the speaker. Also, a comma is added after 'dry' for correct punctuation, and 'and' is added before 'others' to properly list items.

× Yes, I often check weather whenever I go outside or whenever I whenever I stay at home, because whenever I go outside that time why I check weather The lot of reasons actually.

✓ Yes, I often check the weather whenever I go outside or stay at home because there are many reasons why I check the weather when I go outside.

The original sentence is repetitive and lacks proper structure. Adding 'the' before 'weather' is necessary. The sentence is restructured to remove repetition and improve clarity.

× If I go outside without umbrella and after that moment if go, if come the rain then I will down.

✓ If I go outside without an umbrella and it rains, then I will get wet.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Umbrella' needs the article 'an'. The phrase 'if come the rain then I will down' is incorrect; it is corrected to 'it rains, then I will get wet' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Uh, one significant is, uh, global warming, carbon emission as well as the ecosystem and the deforestation is the most significant, Uh, if we continue, uh, doing this process, then, uh, we are.

✓ One significant effect is global warming and carbon emissions, as well as ecosystem damage and deforestation, which are the most significant. If we continue this process, then we will face serious consequences.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. It lacks proper subject-verb agreement and clarity. The correction provides a complete and coherent sentence with proper grammar and meaning.

× Yes, I want to gather or experience the weather differences from other countries or other destination.

✓ Yes, I want to experience the weather differences in other countries or other destinations.

The phrase 'gather or experience' is awkward; 'experience' alone suffices. 'Differences from other countries' should be 'differences in other countries'. Also, 'destination' should be plural 'destinations' to match 'other'.

× Uh, if I go outside in my countries, I try to go Saudi Arab for experiencing, experiencing hot weather.

✓ If I go outside my country, I try to go to Saudi Arabia to experience hot weather.

'Countries' should be singular 'country' when referring to the speaker's own country. 'Saudi Arab' is incorrect; the correct country name is 'Saudi Arabia'. 'For experiencing, experiencing' is repetitive and incorrect; 'to experience' is the correct infinitive form.