Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. For example, "it weren't very cold" should be "it isn't very cold" or "it wasn't very cold." Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

例: The weather where I live is usually hot and wet. In the summer, it rains a lot, and in the winter, it isn't very cold.

提案: There are some pronunciation and grammar mistakes, such as "waiter" instead of "weather" and "I'm gonna frozen" instead of "I will freeze." Also, avoid incomplete sentences and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I prefer weather that is neither too hot nor too cold because in hot weather I sweat a lot, but in cold weather, I feel very cold and uncomfortable.

提案: Your answer is relevant and clear, but some expressions are unnatural, such as "I will get no splits." It would be better to say "I get dry skin" or "my skin cracks." Also, use linking words like "because" and "but" correctly to improve coherence.

例: I prefer weather that is not too dry or too wet because if it is too dry, my skin gets cracked, but if it is too wet, my skin feels sticky, which makes me uncomfortable.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "a good weather" instead of "good weather." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas more naturally.

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast when I plan to go out with my friends because we like taking photos, and good weather is very important for taking beautiful pictures.

提案: Your answer is relevant and clear but could be improved by adding more specific details and using articles correctly, such as "the environment." Also, use linking words like "moreover" or "in addition" to enhance coherence.

例: I think climate change has caused extreme weather conditions that sometimes prevent us from traveling. Moreover, weather phenomena like typhoons and sandstorms can damage the environment.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward expressions, such as "play snows." It would be better to say "play in the snow." Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, I like visiting cities with different climates. For example, I have been to Harbin in northern China, where it is very cold in winter. I enjoy playing in the snow because it doesn't snow in Shenzhen during winter.

× In the summer it has lots of rain and it weren't very cold in the winter.

✓ In the summer it has lots of rain and it wasn't very cold in the winter.

The verb 'weren't' is incorrect here because the subject 'it' is singular. The correct past tense form for singular subjects is 'wasn't'.

× I prefer a waiter that is neither too hot nor too cold because.

✓ I prefer weather that is neither too hot nor too cold because.

The word 'waiter' is a noun referring to a person serving food, which is incorrect in this context. The correct word is 'weather', which refers to atmospheric conditions.

× I think I'm gonna frozen in a cold temperature.

✓ I think I'm going to freeze in cold temperatures.

The phrase 'gonna frozen' is incorrect. 'Gonna' is informal for 'going to' and should be followed by the base form of the verb, which is 'freeze'. Also, 'in a cold temperature' should be pluralized to 'in cold temperatures' for natural expression.

× I prefer weather that is not too dry or too wet because if weather is too dry I will get no splits, but if it is too wet my skin will feel sticky and it really makes me feel uncomfortable.

✓ I prefer weather that is not too dry or too wet because if the weather is too dry I will get splits, but if it is too wet my skin will feel sticky and it really makes me feel uncomfortable.

The word 'weather' is a singular noun and should be preceded by the definite article 'the' when referring to specific conditions. Also, 'no splits' is incorrect; it should be 'splits' without 'no' to indicate the condition.

× Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast when I have a plan to go out and play with my friend because we like taking photos and the weather.

✓ Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast when I have a plan to go out and play with my friends because we like taking photos and the weather.

The phrase 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match the context of 'we' indicating more than one person.

× A good weather is a vital element for taking a beautiful picture.

✓ Good weather is a vital element for taking a beautiful picture.

The noun 'weather' is uncountable and does not take the indefinite article 'a'. Therefore, 'a good weather' is incorrect; it should be 'good weather'.

× I think climate change has brought some extreme weather conditions which prevent us from traveling.

✓ I think climate change has brought some extreme weather conditions which prevent us from traveling.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct.

× What's more, weather phenomena such as typhoons and sandstorms can damage environment.

✓ What's more, weather phenomena such as typhoons and sandstorms can damage the environment.

The noun 'environment' is a singular countable noun in this context and requires the definite article 'the'.

× Yes I like and I have visited some cities in the north of China such as Harbin.

✓ Yes, I like it and I have visited some cities in the north of China such as Harbin.

The sentence is missing the object 'it' after 'I like'. Adding 'it' completes the sentence structure.

× It is really cold in the winter but I like to see and play snows because Shenzhen doesn't snow in the winter.

✓ It is really cold in the winter but I like to see and play in the snow because Shenzhen doesn't snow in the winter.

The word 'snows' is incorrect here; 'snow' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also, the verb 'play' should be followed by the preposition 'in' when referring to snow.