Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は自然で内容も良いですが、最後の文が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。文を完結させ、より具体的な詳細を加えると良いでしょう。

例: The weather where I live is usually sunny or cloudy. However, recently, due to global warming, we have been experiencing many unusually hot days even during the winter season. This change has made the weather less predictable than before, which affects our daily plans.

提案: 回答に文法的な誤りと冗長な表現があります。特に「motivated and tired」は矛盾しているため、正確な感情表現に修正し、文を簡潔にまとめましょう。

例: I prefer cold weather because hot summer days have been increasing recently, which makes me feel tired. In contrast, I feel more comfortable when the weather is cool. For example, I can enjoy outdoor activities more without feeling exhausted.

提案: 文中に意味が不明な部分（"At this minority"）や不自然な表現があります。正しい表現に直し、より自然で明確な文章にしましょう。

例: I prefer dry weather because when it's wet, I often feel unmotivated and my hair gets frizzy, which makes me uncomfortable. Also, dry weather allows me to go outside and enjoy activities without worrying about rain. For example, I can go to work or meet friends more easily when it's dry.

提案: 回答はほぼ良いですが、「check the forecast for on my smartphone」の部分に誤りがあります。前置詞の使い方を修正し、文をより自然にしましょう。

例: Yes, I make it a habit to regularly check the weather forecast, especially during the rainy or typhoon seasons because the weather can change suddenly. I usually check the forecast on my smartphone or watch weather reports on TV to plan my day better.

提案: 「rainy weather increase rapidly」や「extreme weather conditions can distribute our routines」の表現が不自然です。正しい語彙と文法を使い、具体的な影響を明確に述べましょう。

例: I think climate change has had several effects on our daily lives in recent years. For example, if rainy weather increases rapidly, many people may prefer to stay indoors, which can negatively impact their physical health. Additionally, extreme weather conditions can disrupt our daily routines.

提案: 回答は良いですが、「different climate」ではなく「different climates」と複数形にするのが自然です。さらに、もう少し具体的な理由や例を加えると良いでしょう。

例: Yes, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates because I'm curious about environments different from my own. Experiencing various climates can help me broaden my perspective and learn how people adapt to different weather conditions, such as how they dress or what activities they enjoy.

× This change has made the weather less predictable than.

✓ This change has made the weather less predictable than before.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'than' which is a comparative conjunction requiring a comparison object. Adding 'before' completes the comparison and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I prefer cold weather because recently hot days during summer have been increasing, which makes me feel motivated and tired.

✓ I prefer cold weather because recently hot days during summer have been increasing, which makes me feel uncomfortable and tired.

The phrase 'makes me feel motivated and tired' is contradictory because 'motivated' is positive and 'tired' is negative. Likely, the intended meaning is discomfort due to heat. Replacing 'motivated' with 'uncomfortable' clarifies the meaning.

× In contrast, I feel more comfortable and when the weather is cool.

✓ In contrast, I feel more comfortable when the weather is cool.

The conjunction 'and' is unnecessary and causes the sentence to be incomplete. Removing 'and' corrects the sentence structure.

× At this minority prefer dry weather because when it's wet I often feel unmotivated and my hair gets freezing, which makes me uncomfortable.

✓ At this moment, I prefer dry weather because when it's wet I often feel unmotivated and my hair gets freezing, which makes me uncomfortable.

'At this minority' is incorrect; likely intended phrase is 'At this moment'. Also, 'minority' is a noun meaning a smaller part of a group, which does not fit here. Correcting to 'moment' fixes the singular/plural and word choice issue.

× Also, dry weather allows me to go to outside and enjoy activities without worrying about rain.

✓ Also, dry weather allows me to go outside and enjoy activities without worrying about rain.

The phrase 'go to outside' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'go outside' without 'to'. Removing 'to' corrects the prepositional usage.

× For example, I can take work or meet friends more easily when it's dry.

✓ For example, I can go to work or meet friends more easily when it's dry.

The phrase 'take work' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'go to work'. This corrects the verb usage and quantifier issue.

× I usually check the forecast for on my smartphone or watch weather reports on TV to plan my day better.

✓ I usually check the forecast on my smartphone or watch weather reports on TV to plan my day better.

The phrase 'check the forecast for on my smartphone' contains an unnecessary preposition 'for'. Removing 'for' corrects the prepositional error.

× For example, if rainy weather increase rapidly, many people may prefer to stay indoors and avoid going outside, which can negatively impact their physical health.

✓ For example, if rainy weather increases rapidly, many people may prefer to stay indoors and avoid going outside, which can negatively impact their physical health.

The subject 'rainy weather' is singular, so the verb should be 'increases' to agree in number. Correcting the verb form fixes the singular/plural agreement.

× Additionally, extreme weather conditions can distribute our routines.

✓ Additionally, extreme weather conditions can disrupt our routines.

The verb 'distribute' is incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'disrupt', meaning to disturb or interrupt. Correcting the verb improves sentence meaning and structure.

× Yes, I would like to visit other cities that have different climate because I'm curious about environments that are different from my own city or country.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates because I'm curious about environments that are different from my own city or country.

The plural noun 'cities' requires the plural form 'climates' to agree in number. Correcting this ensures subject-object agreement.