Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi trước, sau đó mới đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: The weather where I live is mostly sunny and warm. However, in other parts of my country, it tends to be rainy almost every day.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chú ý ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên.

例: I prefer hot weather because I can go swimming with my parents and enjoy outdoor activities with my friends. On the other hand, rainy and cold weather limits what I can do outside.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

例: I prefer dry weather because it allows me to do many outdoor activities and enjoy my time. Wet weather often makes me feel annoyed and a bit angry.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và ngắn gọn hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu.

例: Not really. I don't usually check the weather forecast because I find it difficult to understand and I am not good at geography.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn. Hãy dùng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để truyền đạt ý kiến hiệu quả.

例: As far as I know, climate change has caused severe natural disasters in the northern part of my country, leading to many deaths and leaving people homeless and without enough food.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng. Hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

例: To be honest, I wouldn't like to visit cities with different climates because I think it would be difficult for me to live and work there.

× It depends a lot on the accommodation and the location we live in.

✓ It depends a lot on the accommodation and the location where we live.

The phrase 'the location we live in' is grammatically acceptable but can be improved for clarity by adding 'where' to specify the location more clearly.

× For example, in my area I think it is very hard and always sunny, but I know that in the other area of my country so very rainy every day.

✓ For example, in my area I think it is very hot and always sunny, but I know that in other areas of my country it is very rainy every day.

The word 'hard' is incorrect to describe weather; 'hot' is appropriate. 'The other area' should be plural 'other areas' to generalize. Also, the sentence lacks the verb 'it is' before 'very rainy'.

× Maybe I prefer hot weather because hot weather that I can go swimming with my parents and enjoy many activities with my friend and although if it was rain I can't do anything outside because it is so cold and I I can't stand on it.

✓ Maybe I prefer hot weather because in hot weather I can go swimming with my parents and enjoy many activities with my friends, but if it rains, I can't do anything outside because it is so cold and I can't stand it.

The sentence has incorrect conjunctions and structure. 'Because hot weather that' is incorrect; it should be 'because in hot weather'. 'Although if it was rain' is incorrect; 'but if it rains' is correct. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends'. 'I can't stand on it' should be 'I can't stand it'.

× Maybe I prefer hot weather because hot weather that I can go swimming with my parents and enjoy many activities with my friend and although if it was rain I can't do anything outside because it is so cold and I I can't stand on it.

✓ Maybe I prefer hot weather because in hot weather I can go swimming with my parents and enjoy many activities with my friends, but if it rains, I can't do anything outside because it is so cold and I can't stand it.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because it refers to multiple activities with more than one friend.

× From my perspective, I prefer dry weather because I feel dry weather we can do a lot of thing outdoor activities and enjoy vary a lot of moments that we can play or engage in physical activities.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer dry weather because I feel that in dry weather we can do a lot of outdoor activities and enjoy many moments where we can play or engage in physical activities.

The sentence lacks 'that' after 'feel' to introduce the clause. 'A lot of thing outdoor activities' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of outdoor activities'. 'Vary a lot of moments' is incorrect; 'many moments' is correct.

× And also the wet weather always make me annoying, a little bit angry.

✓ Also, wet weather always makes me annoyed and a little bit angry.

'Make me annoying' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me annoyed' because the weather causes the feeling, not the person becoming annoying. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'weather'.

× And also the wet weather always make me annoying, a little bit angry.

✓ Also, wet weather always makes me annoyed and a little bit angry.

The subject 'wet weather' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' not 'make'.

× Not really. I am not a people in the habit of checking the weather forecast because I very bad at geography so I don't I don't know how to check the weather forecast and I really find it difficult to concentrate and struggle to see how the weather.

✓ Not really. I am not a person in the habit of checking the weather forecast because I am very bad at geography, so I don't know how to check the weather forecast and I really find it difficult to concentrate and struggle to see what the weather is like.

'I am not a people' is incorrect; 'people' is plural, 'person' is singular. 'I very bad' lacks the verb 'am'. 'See how the weather' is incomplete; it should be 'see what the weather is like'.

× As far as I'm concerned, in the northern of my country there is a big natural disaster so that lose a lot of people and make people to death and they don't have house, don't have family and don't enough food or.

✓ As far as I'm concerned, in the north of my country there was a big natural disaster that caused a lot of people to die, and many people lost their houses, families, and did not have enough food.

The sentence mixes tenses and has incorrect verb forms. 'There is' should be past 'there was' for a past event. 'So that lose' is incorrect; it should be 'that caused'. 'Make people to death' is incorrect; 'caused people to die' is correct. 'Don't have house' should be 'lost their houses'. 'Don't enough food' is incorrect; 'did not have enough food' is correct.

× Would you like to visit other cities that have different comes from my accommodation because I think I will be struggle to live and work at the city.

✓ Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because I think I would struggle to live and work in the city.

'Different comes from my accommodation' is incorrect; it should be 'different climates from where I live'. 'I will be struggle' is incorrect; 'I would struggle' is correct. 'Work at the city' should be 'work in the city'.