Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，且没有直接回答问题。建议直接描述当地天气，避免重复和无关内容。

例: The weather where I live is usually sunny and quite hot, especially during the summer months.

提案: 回答较为直接，但缺少细节和连接词。建议增加原因说明并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: Actually, I prefer cold weather because my hometown is always hot, so I find cooler temperatures more comfortable and refreshing.

提案: 回答简洁但缺少具体细节和连接词。建议补充更多具体原因，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer wet weather because dry conditions often make people feel tired and thirsty, whereas wet weather helps me feel more refreshed.

提案: 回答较好，内容具体且连贯。建议注意用词准确，如“keep the habit”可改为“have the habit”。

例: Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast every night on my mobile phone because it helps me plan my activities and decide what to wear the next day.

提案: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，如“detective”用词不当，且表达不够清晰。建议使用准确词汇并补充具体影响。

例: Nowadays, global warming is a serious problem worldwide. It causes extreme weather events and threatens the environment, so we should all take care of the Earth.

提案: 回答表达不够流畅，语法有误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并补充具体例子。

例: Sure, I enjoy traveling a lot and often visit cities or countries with different climates, such as very hot places, very cold ones, or places with spring-like weather all year round.

× Is it sunny today and it's very hot outside?

✓ It is sunny today and it's very hot outside.

句子开头用疑问句形式不符合语境，应改为陈述句。这里应使用陈述句表达天气状况。

× The sun is very big.

✓ The sun is very strong.

太阳通常不说“big”，而是用“strong”来形容阳光强烈。这里不是单复数错误，但表达不准确。

× dry always makes people tired and thirsty.

✓ dry weather always makes people tired and thirsty.

缺少主语，dry应指代天气，需补充weather。

× I keep the habit of checking the weather forecast every night on my mobile phone because it can help me plan my activities and decide what to wear the next day.

✓ I have the habit of checking the weather forecast every night on my mobile phone because it helps me plan my activities and decide what to wear the next day.

习惯用have the habit of，keep the habit of不常用；动词时态需与习惯动作一致。

× Nowadays the global warming is a big problem for all people over the world and talking about its effects, I think it's detective and dangerous.

✓ Nowadays global warming is a big problem for all people around the world, and talking about its effects, I think it's destructive and dangerous.

global warming前不加the；over the world应为around the world；detective用词错误，应为destructive。

× We person should take care of the earth.

✓ We people should take care of the Earth.

We person表达错误，应为We people；Earth作为地球名词首字母大写。

× Sure, I like traveling very much and I always go to some cities or countries where have different climates, like very hot or very cold or like spring all days.

✓ Sure, I like traveling very much and I always go to some cities or countries that have different climates, like very hot or very cold, or like spring all year round.

关系从句缺少关系代词that；表达不完整，all days应为all year round。