Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，且信息表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，注意时态和单复数，避免重复。

例: I live in Shanghai, where the weather is usually nice with many sunny days. However, we have a rainy season called the plum rain, which lasts for almost a month and can be quite troublesome.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用连词连接句子，避免重复表达。

例: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy sunny days and outdoor activities, such as running. Hot weather makes me feel very comfortable.

提案: 回答中语法错误严重，第二句不完整且含义不明。建议完整表达观点，注意句子结构。

例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes clothes damp and uncomfortable. Also, driving is safer and more comfortable when the weather is dry.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但语法和用词不够准确。建议调整句子结构，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast on my phone, especially when I plan to do outdoor activities or go to school or work.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点，并举例说明。

例: I think climate change has caused serious problems like global warming, which harms our Earth. Therefore, we must protect the environment and plant more trees.

提案: 回答中出现词汇错误（code应为cold），表达不准确。建议注意词汇选择，句子结构清晰。

例: Yes, I would like to visit cold countries like those in the Caribbean region because I want to experience snow and build a snowman in winter. I think that would be very interesting.

× I live in Shanghai and it's pretty nice day, a lot of sunny days but we have cold plum rain seasons almost worrying a month and this very very trouble.

✓ I live in Shanghai and it's a pretty nice day, with a lot of sunny days, but we have a cold plum rain season that lasts almost a month and this is very, very troublesome.

day是可数名词，前面需要加冠词a。seasons应为单数season，因为这里指的是一个季节。worrying用法不当，应改为lasts表示持续时间。trouble应为形容词troublesome。

× I prefer hot weather because I like sunny days, I like go out activities, for example, like running outside, and I like hot weather and I feel very comfortable.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I like sunny days, I like going out for activities, for example, running outside, and I like hot weather and I feel very comfortable.

动词like后面接动名词形式going out，而不是动词原形go out。

× I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes clothes not damp. Drivers with very comfortable.

✓ I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes clothes damp. Drivers are very comfortable.

clothes是复数名词，前面不需要加not，表达意思应为衣服会变湿。Drivers后缺少谓语动词are。

× Yes, especially I want to go outside activities or go out to study or work. I always will check the weather on my phone.

✓ Yes, especially when I want to go outside for activities or go out to study or work, I always check the weather on my phone.

will放在always后面不合适，表示习惯时用一般现在时。go outside activities应改为go outside for activities。

× I think it's more bad, like global warming and it's difficult to our earth, and we must. Protect our Earth and green outside.

✓ I think it's worse, like global warming, and it's harmful to our Earth, so we must protect our Earth and keep it green.

more bad用法错误，应使用比较级worse。difficult to our earth表达不当，应改为harmful to our Earth。句子断裂，应合并并补充完整。

× Yes, I want to code countries like Caribbean because I also want to build a snowman in the winter. I think it's very interesting.

✓ Yes, I want to visit countries like the Caribbean because I also want to build a snowman in the winter. I think it's very interesting.

code countries用词错误，应为visit countries。Caribbean前应加定冠词the。