Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'we are still have' và 'it's keep'. Ngoài ra, nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

例: The weather where I live is very hot throughout the year because it is a tropical country. However, we have a short rainy season which helps keep the environment comfortable.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và chính tả từ 'scorching'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'to to suffer'. Nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer cold weather because I find scorching hot days very uncomfortable. The dry atmosphere makes me feel tired and exhausted.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I don't prefer none' và 'I doesn't'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu phủ định đúng và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

例: I don't prefer either dry or wet weather. I like moderate weather because the balance between dry and wet conditions makes it comfortable to do everything without feeling tired.

提案: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng bạn nên dùng từ vựng chính xác hơn như 'outdoor activities' thay vì 'outside activity'. Ngoài ra, nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I'm not in the habit of checking the weather forecast regularly. I usually check it only when I plan to travel far away or have outdoor activities, but even then, it's quite occasional.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sắp xếp ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn, dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng chính xác. Nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và logic hơn.

例: Climate change affects many aspects of our lives. For example, it causes the average temperature to rise, endangers some animal species, increases sea levels, and leads to the melting of ice.

提案: Câu trả lời khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng nhưng bạn nên tránh lặp từ như 'skiing, skiing' và dùng từ vựng chính xác hơn như 'winter activities' thay vì 'winter activity'.

例: I would love to visit cities with different climates. For example, I dream of going to northern countries where it snows because I want to experience playing in the snow, building a snowman, and trying skiing. It would be exciting to enjoy various winter activities.

× the sun is still shining on all the time

✓ the sun is still shining all the time

The preposition 'on' is unnecessary after 'shining' in this context. The correct phrase is 'shining all the time'.

× But luckily we are still have a short rain season

✓ But luckily we still have a short rain season

The phrase 'are still have' is incorrect. 'Still have' is the correct form to express ongoing possession or occurrence. 'Are' should be removed.

× so it's keep the environment easy to live

✓ so it keeps the environment easy to live in

The verb 'keep' should be in the third person singular present tense 'keeps' to agree with 'it'. Also, 'easy to live' is incomplete; it should be 'easy to live in' to be grammatically correct.

× I can't tolerate the scotching day in these days

✓ I can't tolerate the scorching days these days

The adjective 'scotching' is incorrect; the correct word is 'scorching'. Also, 'day' should be plural 'days' to match 'these days'.

× There's no moisture in atmosphere and very dry

✓ There's no moisture in the atmosphere and it is very dry

The noun 'atmosphere' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, the sentence needs a subject 'it' before 'is very dry' for completeness.

× I feel so tired to to suffer that day

✓ I feel so tired of suffering that day

The phrase 'tired to to suffer' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'tired of suffering'. Also, 'to to' is a typo.

× I don't prefer none of the weather

✓ I don't prefer any of the weather

Using double negatives like 'don't prefer none' is incorrect. The correct form is 'don't prefer any'.

× I like the moderate weather, just like the balance between dry and wet is so suitable to do everything and I doesn't feel tired

✓ I like moderate weather, just like the balance between dry and wet is so suitable to do everything and I don't feel tired

'I doesn't' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't' to agree with the subject 'I'. Also, 'the moderate weather' can be simplified to 'moderate weather'.

× I'm not in that habit

✓ I'm not in the habit

The phrase 'in the habit' is the correct idiomatic expression, not 'in that habit'.

× but even then it's quite occasionally

✓ but even then it's quite occasional

The adverb 'occasionally' is incorrect here; the adjective 'occasional' should be used to describe 'it'.

× The climate change effects all the aspects of our life, such as its increase, the average temperature and endangered some animal rising the level of sea and the melting of ice

✓ Climate change affects all aspects of our life, such as the increase in average temperature, endangerment of some animals, rising sea levels, and melting ice

The original sentence has multiple grammatical errors including incorrect verb form 'effects' instead of 'affects', awkward phrasing, and missing articles. The corrected sentence improves clarity and grammar.

× I dream of going to the northern countries where it snows because I want to experience playing snow, building a snowman or yeah, just trying skiing, skiing

✓ I dream of going to northern countries where it snows because I want to experience playing in the snow, building a snowman, or just trying skiing

The phrase 'playing snow' is incorrect; it should be 'playing in the snow'. Also, 'trying skiing' is correct but 'trying skiing, skiing' is repetitive and should be simplified.

× It could be exciting to enjoy winter activity

✓ It could be exciting to enjoy winter activities

The noun 'activity' should be plural 'activities' to match the context of multiple possible winter activities.