Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复表达。

例: I live in a subtropical area where summers are often hot and rainy. I don't really like the humid weather because it makes me feel uncomfortable.

提案: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并提供具体原因。

例: I prefer cold winters because I can wear warm clothes and I don't feel sweaty. Also, cold weather is more comfortable for me to go outside.

提案: 句子结构复杂且不连贯，表达不够清楚，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并明确表达观点。

例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel uncomfortable and my skin gets irritated. Although dry weather can sometimes be harsh, I find it more pleasant than wet weather.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误，建议完整表达习惯和频率，注意句子完整性。

例: Yes, I often check the weather forecast before going outside, especially in the morning. This helps me decide what to wear for the day.

提案: 表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用不准确，建议简化句子并具体说明气候变化的影响。

例: I think climate change has caused more extreme weather recently. For example, in my area, typhoons have become more frequent and severe.

提案: 句子结构混乱，表达不完整，建议简洁明了地说明愿望和原因。

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. Since I live in a place without snow, I want to experience a snowy day.

× Well, I think I live in a subtropical climate area so in my area is often rainy when it was in summer and it's hot and moist and I don't like this.

✓ Well, I think I live in a subtropical climate area, so in my area it is often rainy in summer, and it's hot and moist, and I don't like this.

句中“in my area is often rainy”缺少主语，应该是“in my area it is often rainy”。此外，“when it was in summer”时态和表达不正确，改为“in summer”更合适。

× Whilst I I think I'm a fan of cold winters because in the cold winters you can stretch some clothes to keep up and it will not sweaty and it can't go outside.

✓ Whilst I think I'm a fan of cold winters because in cold winters you can wear some clothes to keep warm, and it will not be sweaty, and you can go outside.

“stretch some clothes to keep up”表达错误，应为“wear some clothes to keep warm”。“it will not sweaty”缺少be动词，应为“it will not be sweaty”。“it can't go outside”主语错误，应为“you can go outside”。

× Whilst I prefer dry weather, although some people may seem dry, weathers will call your skins uncomfortable, but compare with the wet weather, it's so watery and I really don't like this weather so I think I will love dry weather more.

✓ Whilst I prefer dry weather, although some people may find dry weather makes their skin uncomfortable, compared with wet weather, it's so watery and I really don't like this weather, so I think I will like dry weather more.

“some people may seem dry, weathers will call your skins uncomfortable”表达不清且用词错误，应改为“some people may find dry weather makes their skin uncomfortable”。“compare with”应为“compared with”。“I will love dry weather more”表达不自然，改为“I will like dry weather more”。

× Yes, I was for the reason is I live in the area where it's located in the soundness of China is it can be snow, so I really want to experience a snowy day. It's not.

✓ Yes, the reason is I live in an area located in the south of China where it can snow, so I really want to experience a snowy day. It doesn't snow here.

“located in the soundness of China”中“soundness”拼写错误，应为“south”。“is it can be snow”语序错误，应为“where it can snow”。“It's not”表达不完整，改为“It doesn't snow here”。

× Yes, I think I quite often to check the weather forecast before I would go outside. I usually check the weather, focus on the mornings, then I can prepare to dress and.

✓ Yes, I think I quite often check the weather forecast before I go outside. I usually check the weather in the mornings so that I can prepare what to wear.

“I quite often to check”中“to”多余，应去掉。时态应保持一致，改为“before I go outside”。“focus on the mornings”表达不准确，应为“check the weather in the mornings”。“prepare to dress and”不完整，改为“prepare what to wear”。

× Well, I think under the effects of global warming and the climate change is frequently especially some extremist weathers like I'm living in an area where it will suffer from typhoon as more and more often.

✓ Well, I think under the effects of global warming, climate change is happening frequently, especially some extreme weather. I live in an area where we suffer from typhoons more and more often.

“the climate change is frequently”表达不完整，应为“climate change is happening frequently”。“extremist weathers”用词错误，应为“extreme weather”。“it will suffer from typhoon”主语错误，应为“we suffer from typhoons”。

× Well, I think I live in a subtropical climate area so in my area is often rainy when it was in summer and it's hot and moist and I don't like this.

✓ Well, I think I live in a subtropical climate area, so in my area it is often rainy in summer, and it's hot and moist, and I don't like this.

“in summer”是正确的时间介词表达，“when it was in summer”不正确，应去掉“when it was”。

× Whilst I I think I'm a fan of cold winters because in the cold winters you can stretch some clothes to keep up and it will not sweaty and it can't go outside.

✓ Whilst I think I'm a fan of cold winters because in cold winters you can wear some clothes to keep warm, and it will not be sweaty, and you can go outside.

“it can't go outside”中的“it”指代错误，应为“you”。

× Whilst I prefer dry weather, although some people may seem dry, weathers will call your skins uncomfortable, but compare with the wet weather, it's so watery and I really don't like this weather so I think I will love dry weather more.

✓ Whilst I prefer dry weather, although some people may find dry weather makes their skin uncomfortable, compared with wet weather, it's so watery and I really don't like this weather, so I think I will like dry weather more.

“weathers will call your skins uncomfortable”表达不正确，应为“dry weather makes their skin uncomfortable”。

× Yes, I think I quite often to check the weather forecast before I would go outside. I usually check the weather, focus on the mornings, then I can prepare to dress and.

✓ Yes, I think I quite often check the weather forecast before I go outside. I usually check the weather in the mornings so that I can prepare what to wear.

句子结构不完整，“focus on the mornings”应改为“check the weather in the mornings”，“prepare to dress and”不完整，应补充完整表达。