Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复表达，如“very hot and very wet”可以简化为“hot and humid”。此外，句子结构较为简单，建议使用更自然流畅的表达方式。

例: I live in Guangzhou, where the weather is hot and humid during the summer, so I usually prefer to stay indoors to avoid the heat.

提案: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议明确表达偏好并给出具体原因，避免重复和不完整的句子。

例: I prefer cold weather because I can wear warm clothes and feel comfortable, whereas hot weather often makes me feel tired and sweaty.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子并具体说明原因，避免无关内容。

例: I prefer dry weather because wet conditions make my skin feel uncomfortable, and dry weather helps me stay refreshed by drinking more water.

提案: 回答时时态使用不当，且表达重复。建议使用正确时态，简洁明了地说明习惯和频率。

例: I usually don't check the weather forecast daily, but I do check it about once a week before going outside.

提案: 回答中出现词汇错误（crime change应为climate change），句子未完成且缺乏具体细节。建议注意词汇准确性，完整表达观点并举例说明。

例: In recent years, climate change has caused more frequent and severe weather events like hurricanes and floods, which have seriously affected both the environment and people's lives.

提案: 回答表达不够流畅，存在语法和用词错误。建议简洁明了地表达愿望并说明原因，避免重复。

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates to experience new things and learn more about the world.

× The weather here is very hot and very wet nowadays because we are in summer and this weather I wouldn't like to go outside because it's so hot.

✓ The weather here is very hot and very wet nowadays because we are in summer, and because of this weather, I wouldn't like to go outside because it's so hot.

句子中缺少连接词，导致句子结构不完整。需要用连词"and"连接两个分句，并用"because of this weather"明确原因。

× I prefer cold weather because if the weather is cold I can just more to keep me warm, but if the weather is so hot I can go outside and I'd like to, I would, I will.

✓ I prefer cold weather because if the weather is cold I can just wear more to keep me warm, but if the weather is so hot I can go outside and I'd like to.

原句中"just more"缺少动词，应该是"wear more"。另外，"I'd like to, I would, I will"表达重复且不连贯，应简化为"I'd like to"。

× if the weather so wet my skin will feel uncomfortable and if the weather is dry I can drink more water to keep myself.

✓ If the weather is so wet, my skin will feel uncomfortable, and if the weather is dry, I can drink more water to keep myself hydrated.

缺少动词"is"，导致句子不完整。"keep myself"后应加补充说明，如"hydrated"，使表达完整。

× In my daily life, I didn't. I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast. I usually check the weather forecast when I would like to go outside once a week.

✓ In my daily life, I don't. I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast. I usually check the weather forecast when I would like to go outside, about once a week.

"I didn't"时态不符合语境，应为现在时"I don't"。另外，"once a week"前应加逗号或副词"about"使表达更自然。

× In recent years, crime change has had profound effects on the environment and human life. Firstly, we have more frequent and severe weather events such as hurricanes, floods and drones, which has caused.

✓ In recent years, climate change has had profound effects on the environment and human life. Firstly, we have more frequent and severe weather events such as hurricanes, floods, and droughts, which have caused many problems.

"crime change"应为"climate change"。"drones"应为"droughts"。"which has caused"主语为复数，应改为"which have caused"。

× Yes, I'd like to visit other cities that have different climate from where I live because I'd like to experience more experience thing that and I can know much more about the world.

✓ Yes, I'd like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because I'd like to experience more things and I can learn much more about the world.

"different climate"应为复数"different climates"。"more experience thing that"表达不正确，应改为"more things"。"know much more"应改为"learn much more"更符合语境。