Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt ngắn gọn, súc tích.

例: I live in Vietnam, which has a typical tropical climate with two main seasons. The hot season is usually hot and wet, while the cold season tends to be quite cool and dry.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ như 'really like'. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn để diễn đạt sở thích của bạn.

例: I prefer cold weather because I tend to feel uncomfortable when it's hot. Moreover, I enjoy wearing hoodies and long trousers during winter, and drinking hot tea in the evenings.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp lại ý và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy diễn đạt cảm xúc một cách tự nhiên và chính xác.

例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes it difficult for my clothes to dry, which is quite frustrating.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách chính xác và tự nhiên.

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast the day before to prepare for the next day's weather.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ như 'so crazy'. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách chính xác, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

例: I think climate change has caused unusual weather patterns in Vietnam. For example, even during summer, the weather has been unexpectedly cool, which I have never experienced before.

提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ 'because' và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

例: I would like to visit Korea because it snows there in winter, unlike Vietnam. I am eager to experience snow for the first time.

× I live in Vietnam where is the weather is typical and it has two main seasons.

✓ I live in Vietnam where the weather is typical and it has two main seasons.

The phrase 'where is the weather is' contains an unnecessary 'is' after 'where'. The correct structure is 'where the weather is'. This is a common mistake involving the 'there be' structure and relative clauses.

× It is hot season and cold season.

✓ It is the hot season and the cold season.

The terms 'hot season' and 'cold season' are countable and specific, so they require the definite article 'the'. Also, 'season' should be singular here as it refers to each season individually.

× The hot season is hot and wet but the cold season is so cold and so dry.

✓ The hot season is hot and wet, but the cold season is very cold and very dry.

The conjunction 'but' should be preceded by a comma when connecting two independent clauses. Also, 'so cold and so dry' is informal; 'very cold and very dry' is more appropriate in this context.

× I prefer cold weather because I get hot and I really like to wear hoodie and long trousers in the winter and I really like hot tea at the evening every day.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I get hot, and I really like to wear a hoodie and long trousers in the winter, and I really like hot tea in the evening every day.

The phrase 'at the evening' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in the evening'. Also, 'hoodie' is a countable noun and requires an article 'a'. Commas are added for clarity.

× I prefer dry weather because when the wet weather my clothes doesn't dry and I don't have clothes to wear and I feel so annoying.

✓ I prefer dry weather because when it is wet, my clothes don't dry, and I don't have clothes to wear, and I feel very annoyed.

'Wet weather' needs the verb 'is' to form a complete clause. 'Clothes' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. 'Feel so annoying' is incorrect; it should be 'feel very annoyed' to express the feeling properly.

× It feels so annoying.

✓ It is very annoying.

The phrase 'It feels so annoying' is awkward. 'It is very annoying' is a clearer and more natural expression to describe a situation causing annoyance.

× Yes, I usually check the weather forecast in the last day.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast the day before.

'In the last day' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'the day before' or 'the previous day' when referring to checking the forecast for the next day. Also, 'usually' suggests a habitual action, so the phrase should reflect that.

× To know the weather of tomorrow that I can prefer prepare the for the weather.

✓ I check it to know the weather for tomorrow so that I can prepare for it.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence uses proper sentence structure and conjunctions to express purpose and result clearly.

× I think the climate change is so crazy because in Vietnam, although in the summer, but the weather is cool, it is so crazy and I never ever seen this weather in Vietnam before.

✓ I think climate change is crazy because, although it is summer in Vietnam, the weather is cool. It is so unusual, and I have never seen this kind of weather in Vietnam before.

The conjunctions 'because', 'although', and 'but' are misused together. 'Although' introduces a contrast and should not be combined with 'but'. Also, 'never ever seen' requires the present perfect tense 'have never seen'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× I would like to visit Korea because in the winter of Korea it has snow, because in Vietnam we don't have snow.

✓ I would like to visit Korea because in Korean winters there is snow, but in Vietnam, we don't have snow.

The phrase 'in the winter of Korea' is awkward; 'in Korean winters' is more natural. Also, 'it has snow' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'there is snow'. The conjunction 'because' is replaced with 'but' to contrast the two clauses properly.