Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“will at least is warm”应改为“is at least warm”。建议注意时态和主谓一致，避免冗余表达。可以用更连贯的句子表达天气变化。

例: The weather where I live is generally warm because I live in the southern part of China. Due to climate change, temperatures have risen significantly, making the weather more unpredictable and variable.

提案: 回答较为自然，但“hot and warm weathers”表达重复，且句子结构可以更简洁。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁句式，避免重复。

例: I prefer hot weather because it helps me feel more focused and energetic. In contrast, cold weather makes me feel lazy and want to stay in bed.

提案: 回答中“wild weather”应为“wet weather”，且存在语法错误和用词不当，如“notions”应为“lotions”。建议注意词汇准确性和语法正确性。

例: I prefer wet weather because the moisture keeps my skin comfortable. In dry weather, my skin feels itchy, so I need to apply more lotion, which makes me less confident.

提案: 回答表达有些冗长且不够连贯，如“just for a case I didn't take a umbrella”应改为“in case I forget to bring an umbrella”。建议使用更自然的表达和连接词。

例: I check the weather forecast every day because the weather changes frequently. This helps me avoid situations like forgetting an umbrella. Also, I always check it before going hiking.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，句子不完整。建议加强句子结构，使用完整句子表达观点，并提供具体例子。

例: I think climate change has caused global temperatures to rise by several degrees Celsius. This leads to more extreme weather, such as hotter summers and colder winters, which can cause health problems in summer and cold spells in winter.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“different weathers”应为“different weather”，且句子结构不够流畅。建议使用更准确的词汇和更连贯的句子。

例: Definitely, I want to visit cities with different climates, especially in the northern part of the country. Since I grew up in the south, I would like to try winter activities like skiing.

× Well, the weather will at least is warm because I live in the South part of China.

✓ Well, the weather is at least warm because I live in the South part of China.

句子中使用了将来时态“will”，但描述的是现在的天气状况，应使用一般现在时。

× Generally speaking, with climate change, the temperature has rose a lot.

✓ Generally speaking, with climate change, the temperature has risen a lot.

“has rose”是错误的过去分词形式，正确的现在完成时应使用“has risen”。

× Additionally, the weather become unpredictable and fickle.

✓ Additionally, the weather becomes unpredictable and fickle.

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“becomes”。

× Actually, I prefer hot weather because I will feel more focused and energetic in hot and warm weathers.

✓ Actually, I prefer hot weather because I will feel more focused and energetic in hot and warm weather.

“weather”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“weathers”。

× When it's very cold, I just want to lie on the bed and will become very lazy.

✓ When it's very cold, I just want to lie on the bed and become very lazy.

“will become”在这里不合适，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时。

× Actually, I prefer wild weather because moist weather made me feel comfortable about my skin.

✓ Actually, I prefer mild weather because moist weather makes me feel comfortable about my skin.

“wild”应为“mild”，表示温和的；“made”时态错误，应为一般现在时“makes”。

× In dry weather I usually feel itch on my skin, so I like the wild weather.

✓ In dry weather I usually feel itchy on my skin, so I like the mild weather.

“feel itch”应改为“feel itchy”，形容词形式；“wild”应为“mild”。

× I don't need to put on more notions and I feel more confident.

✓ I don't need to put on more lotions and I feel more confident.

“notions”应为“lotions”，意为护肤品。

× Actually, nowadays I check the weather forecast every day because the weather is changeable, just for a case I didn't take a umbrella or in a very embarrassed situation.

✓ Actually, nowadays I check the weather forecast every day because the weather is changeable, just in case I don't take an umbrella or am in a very embarrassing situation.

“just for a case”应为“just in case”；“didn't take”时态不符，应为一般现在时“don't take”；“a umbrella”冠词错误，应为“an umbrella”；“embarrassed”应为“embarrassing”。

× And sometimes if I want to go hiking I would definitely check the weather.

✓ And sometimes if I want to go hiking I will definitely check the weather.

条件句中表达将来时，使用“will”更合适。

× Well I think the climate change has caused global temperature rise to rise by degrees Celsius.

✓ Well, I think climate change has caused the global temperature to rise by degrees Celsius.

句子结构混乱，需调整词序和冠词使用。

× Less light to some extreme weather like warmer summers or colder winters.

✓ There is less light and some extreme weather like warmer summers or colder winters.

原句缺少主语和谓语，且“less light to”用法错误。

× For example in summer equals some health problems.

✓ For example, in summer there are some health problems.

句子缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整。

× Well in winter the cold spell course.

✓ Well, in winter the cold spell occurs.

“course”应为“occurs”，且句子缺少逗号。

× Definitely I want to experience different places that have different weathers, particularly the cities in north part because when I was a kid I have been living in South Park so I want to experience the icy activities like skiing.

✓ Definitely I want to experience different places that have different weather, particularly the cities in the north part because when I was a kid I lived in the South part so I want to experience icy activities like skiing.

“weathers”应为不可数名词“weather”；“north part”前需加定冠词“the”；“have been living”时态不当，应为过去时“lived”；“South Park”应为“South part”。