Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复表达，如“usually”重复出现。句子结构可以更自然流畅，注意大小写和标点符号的正确使用。可以适当使用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: It's summer now in Shanghai, so it's very hot and rainy. Summer usually lasts about two months here. After that, we have a cool and windy autumn, which I really enjoy.

提案: 回答中出现重复词汇“I I”，需要注意发音和表达的准确性。句子结构可以更完整，增加连接词使表达更自然。

例: I don't really like very cold or very hot weather. I prefer mild seasons like spring or autumn because the weather is sunny and breezy in Shanghai during those times.

提案: 句子表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式。句子结构较复杂且不够流畅，建议简化并使用连接词。

例: I prefer wet weather to dry weather, but only if I can use an air conditioner to keep the air comfortable and not too humid.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但有重复词汇“put put”，需要注意发音和表达准确。句子可以更简洁，避免冗余。

例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because I need to dress my kids appropriately for school and decide whether to bring an umbrella to work.

提案: 表达不够准确，建议使用更自然的句式，如“the climate has become less friendly to plants and humans”。注意单复数和语法的正确使用。

例: In recent years, the weather has become hotter, and I think the climate has become less friendly to many plants and humans.

提案: 句子表达可以更自然，避免使用“I'm quite expecting”，建议用“I am looking forward to”。注意冠词和介词的正确使用。

例: Yes, I love traveling and would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, Dali in China is said to have spring-like weather all year round, and I am looking forward to visiting it.

× It's summer now, so it's very hot outside and we got a lot of rain in summer.

✓ It's summer now, so it's very hot outside and we get a lot of rain in summer.

这里描述的是现在的季节和习惯性的天气情况，应该使用一般现在时，而不是过去时。将 'got' 改为 'get' 更符合时态要求。

× Then we will have autumn, Very cool and windy autumn.

✓ Then we will have autumn, a very cool and windy autumn.

句子中缺少冠词 'a'，且 'Very' 不应大写。需要加冠词并调整大小写，使句子结构完整。

× I'm afraid I I like neither of them.

✓ I'm afraid I like neither of them.

句子中出现了重复的主语 'I'，应删除多余的一个，避免语法错误。

× In Shanghai we get sunshine and windy.

✓ In Shanghai we get sunshine and wind.

'windy' 是形容词，句中应使用名词 'wind' 来与 'sunshine' 并列，保持句子结构正确。

× Comparing to dry weather, I prefer wet weather on the condition that we have some air conditioner to get the air not so humid.

✓ Compared to dry weather, I prefer wet weather on the condition that we have some air conditioner to make the air not so humid.

'Comparing to' 应改为 'Compared to'，表示比较的正确表达方式。

× I need to check what kind of clothes I need to put put for them.

✓ I need to check what kind of clothes I need to put on for them.

动词短语应为 'put on'，表示穿衣服，缺少介词 'on' 导致表达不完整。

× And I also need to go work, so I need to check if I need to bring some umbrella or something like that.

✓ And I also need to go to work, so I need to check if I need to bring an umbrella or something like that.

'go work' 应为 'go to work'，缺少介词 'to'。此外，'some umbrella' 应改为 'an umbrella'，因为 'umbrella' 是可数名词单数。

× I think the climate becomes not friendly to a lot of plants and as well as human being.

✓ I think the climate becomes unfriendly to a lot of plants as well as human beings.

'not friendly' 应改为形容词 'unfriendly'，'human being' 应使用复数 'human beings'，且 'as well as' 前不需要逗号。

× For example, there is a city named Dali in China and it was said that the weather there is like spring all over the year.

✓ For example, there is a city named Dali in China and it is said that the weather there is like spring all year round.

'was said' 应改为 'is said'，因为这是一个普遍事实；'all over the year' 应改为 'all year round'，更地道的表达。