Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较自然且内容丰富，但最后一句“Even the biscuits you just opened will go”表达不够清晰，建议用更具体的描述来说明潮湿的影响。

例: I live in Suzhou, where the weather is mostly sunny and pleasant. However, during the plum rain season, which lasts about a month, it rains almost every day, making everything feel damp and uncomfortable. For instance, even food like biscuits can become soggy quickly due to the humidity.

提案: 回答结构清晰，但“hot or wet”可能是口误，应为“hot or cold”，建议注意用词准确性，并增加连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer mild weather throughout the year because it's comfortable. However, if I have to choose between hot and cold weather, I would choose hot weather since it feels more lively, whereas winter often seems gloomy and lifeless.

提案: 回答内容具体且表达清晰，建议在句子间加入连接词以增强连贯性。

例: I prefer a moderate climate because dry weather makes my skin itchy, while excessively wet weather is inconvenient. For example, dampness makes clothes take a long time to dry, so a balanced climate suits me best.

提案: 回答简洁自然，内容完整。可以尝试用连接词连接两句，使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going out, especially if I have outdoor plans or need to decide what to wear. I use my mobile phone because it's quick and very convenient.

提案: 回答内容具体且有例子，建议使用更多连接词使句子间逻辑更紧密。

例: I believe climate change has led to more extreme and unpredictable weather. For instance, summers have become hotter, and there are more sudden rainstorms and floods in some areas. Moreover, it negatively impacts agriculture and water supply, which is quite concerning.

提案: 回答自然且内容丰富，建议在两种不同气候的描述之间使用连接词，使表达更连贯。

例: Definitely, I'd like to visit places with different climates from where I live. For example, I want to experience a snowy winter in Hokkaido, Japan, and also enjoy the tropical warmth and beaches in Bali.

× Honestly, I prefer a mild weather all year round where it is neither too hot nor too cold.

✓ Honestly, I prefer mild weather all year round where it is neither too hot nor too cold.

这里的“weather”是不可数名词，不需要加冠词“a”。使用“a mild weather”是不正确的，应该直接用“mild weather”。

× Even the biscuits you just opened will go.

✓ Even the biscuits you just opened will go soggy.

原句缺少了描述饼干状态的形容词，导致句子不完整。应补充“soggy”表示饼干变潮湿。

× I usually check the weather forecast before heading out, especially when I have outdoor plans or need to decide what to wear.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast before heading out, especially when I have outdoor plans or need to decide on what to wear.

动词“decide”后面搭配介词“on”表示“决定某事”，缺少“on”会导致搭配错误。

× Definitely I'd like to visit a place with a snowy winter like Hokkaido in Japan, just to experience what a real winter feels like.

✓ Definitely I'd like to visit a place with snowy winters like Hokkaido in Japan, just to experience what a real winter feels like.

“winter”在此处应使用复数形式“winters”，表示多次或一般的冬季气候特征。

× Or maybe somewhere tropical and warm like Bali, to enjoy the sunshine and the beach.

✓ Or maybe somewhere tropical and warm like Bali, to enjoy the sunshine and beaches.

“beach”通常用复数形式“beaches”表示海滩的泛指，尤其是在旅游语境中。