Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，且信息表达不清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达季节特点，并避免重复和冗余。

例: I live in Beijing, where summers are usually hot and winters are cold. In recent years, summers have become hotter and wetter than before.

提案: 表达不流畅，语法错误较多，且句子不完整。建议使用简单明了的句子表达喜好，并给出具体原因。

例: I prefer cold weather because hot weather often makes me feel anxious. Although I need to wear more clothes in cold weather, I find it more comfortable.

提案: 回答不完整，表达不清晰，且有重复词汇。建议完整表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并给出具体理由。

例: I definitely prefer dry weather. Some people like wet weather because it makes their skin smoother, but I feel more comfortable in dry conditions, especially during hot seasons.

提案: 句子结构混乱，表达不够自然。建议使用更简洁的句子，明确说明习惯和原因。

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning and before I go out. It helps me prepare for any sudden changes in the weather.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多。建议完整表达观点，使用具体例子，并注意语法准确。

例: In my country, many places have become hotter due to climate change. Even northern regions like Heilongjiang experience higher temperatures in summer.

提案: 表达基本清晰，但句子结构和用词可以更自然。建议丰富表达，使用更地道的句型。

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, such as Kunming, which has a spring-like climate all year round. It would be a great opportunity to experience different parts of my country.

× I live in Beijing and the weather in a year is always very significant, like summer is high and winter is cold, but recent years summer has been hot and wet which is usually.

✓ I live in Beijing and the weather throughout the year is always very distinct, like summers are hot and winters are cold, but in recent years summers have been hot and wet, which is usual.

这里“summer”和“winter”应使用复数形式“summers”和“winters”，因为指的是多个年份中的多个夏天和冬天。中文中复数概念不明显，但英语中表示多次发生的季节应使用复数。

× I prove I prefer cold because hot weather offer often brings me a feeling of anxious or just negative feelings.

✓ I prove I prefer cold because hot weather often brings me a feeling of anxiety or just negative feelings.

“offer”在这里用错了，应去掉。并且“a feeling of anxious”中“anxious”应为名词形式“anxiety”。“prove”用法不当，应改为“I think”或“I believe”。

× But although cold weather needs me to wear more clothes, it's actually a good.

✓ But although cold weather makes me wear more clothes, it's actually good.

“needs me to wear”表达不自然，应改为“makes me wear”。“a good”缺少名词，改为“good”即可。

× Absolutely dry. For some people I think they like Wet Wet weather because water makes their skin more smooth.

✓ Absolutely dry. For some people, I think they like wet weather because water makes their skin smoother.

“Wet Wet”重复且首字母大写错误，应为“wet”。“more smooth”应为比较级“smoother”。

× But imagine like the hot seasons. Dry makes me feel more.

✓ But imagine the hot seasons. Dry weather makes me feel better.

句子结构不完整，“Dry makes me feel more”缺少宾语，改为“Dry weather makes me feel better”更完整。

× So when I in the morning I usually check and when I need to get out of my house, I usually check it to see if I need to bring up.

✓ So in the morning, I usually check, and when I need to get out of my house, I usually check to see if I need to bring an umbrella.

“when I in the morning”缺少动词，应为“in the morning, I usually check”。“bring up”不完整，应为“bring an umbrella”。

× Like in our country, places are being more hot. Even the southern places like Heilongjiang have hotter temperature in summer and.

✓ In our country, places are getting hotter. Even northern places like Heilongjiang have higher temperatures in summer.

“are being more hot”用法错误，应为“are getting hotter”。“southern places like Heilongjiang”错误，黑龙江在北方，应为“northern places”。“hotter temperature”应为复数“higher temperatures”。

× Yes, I'd like to try new places and new environments like Kunming, which is always spring. I think this will give me a more experience of our country places.

✓ Yes, I'd like to try new places and new environments like Kunming, which is always like spring. I think this will give me more experience of places in our country.

“a more experience”错误，experience不可数，去掉冠词“a”。“our country places”表达不自然，应为“places in our country”。