Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如"the hot"应为"hot"，且表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: The weather in Shanghai is usually humid and hot, especially during the summer. I don't really like it because it makes me feel uncomfortable.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如"the sky are"应为"the sky is"，且表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词改善句子流畅度，并注意主谓一致。

例: I prefer summer even though it's hot and uncomfortable because the sky is often clear and blue during that season.

提案: 回答表达了个人感受，但存在重复和语法错误，如"stick on on"和"hard to dry up the"。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用更准确的短语。

例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes my skin feel sticky, and it's uncomfortable when my clothes don't dry quickly.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如"plan for the plan for a trip"和"make sure the IT will not rain"。建议简化句子，避免重复，并注意代词使用。

例: Yes, I always check the weather forecast before planning a trip to make sure it won't rain.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，如"more relieve more carbon"。建议理清思路，使用准确的词汇和句子结构表达观点。

例: Climate change is mainly caused by human activities, especially industrial growth, which releases more carbon dioxide into the atmosphere.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如"try live in more different countries"和"I am prefer"。建议使用正确的动词形式和更自然的表达。

例: Yes, I would like to live in different countries with various climates to gain new experiences and feelings.

× Well, the weather in Shanghai is always humid and the hot, especially in summer.

✓ Well, the weather in Shanghai is always humid and hot, especially in summer.

这里“the hot”中的定冠词“the”使用错误，形容词前通常不加定冠词。应直接使用“hot”。

× And honestly I don't like this weather anymore because it's made me feel a little bit hot.

✓ And honestly I don't like this weather anymore because it makes me feel a little bit hot.

这里“it's made me feel”使用了现在完成时，但表达的是现在的感觉，应使用一般现在时“it makes me feel”。

× Oh well, I would say that I prefer umm the summer, although it's really hot and uncomfortable, but in summer the sky are always full of cloud and blue.

✓ Oh well, I would say that I prefer umm the summer, although it's really hot and uncomfortable, but in summer the sky is always full of clouds and blue.

主语“the sky”是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“is”。“cloud”应为复数“clouds”，表示多云。

× Well, I would say I prefer the dry weather because wet weather sometimes may make me feel sticky on my skin.

✓ Well, I would say I prefer the dry weather because wet weather sometimes may make me feel sticky to my skin.

表达“粘在皮肤上”时，介词应使用“to”而非“on”。

× It's like something stick on on my leg, on my hands and it's hard to dry up the.

✓ It's like something sticks on my leg, on my hands and it's hard to dry up.

“stick”应为第三人称单数形式“sticks”，去掉重复的“on”，句尾“dry up the”缺少宾语，应去掉“the”。

× I have the habit of checking weathers in advance, especially when I have to plan for the plan for a trip.

✓ I have the habit of checking the weather in advance, especially when I have to plan for a trip.

“weather”是不可数名词，不用复数形式“weathers”。“plan for the plan for a trip”重复，应简化为“plan for a trip”。

× I would check the weather in advance so to make sure the IT will not rain.

✓ I would check the weather in advance to make sure it will not rain.

“the IT”错误，应该是代词“it”，且“so to”多余，改为“to”。

× Well, there are so many reasons for the climate change, this phenomenon and the most important point maybe is the human activity and the increase of industry, because this activity more relieve more carbon.

✓ Well, there are so many reasons for climate change, this phenomenon, and the most important point maybe is human activity and the increase of industry, because these activities release more carbon.

“the climate change”中“climate change”通常不加定冠词。复数名词“activities”应与“these”搭配。动词“relieve”用错，应为“release”。

× Oh yes, I would like to try live in more different countries with the different weathers because I am prefer to have more experience in the different feeling.

✓ Oh yes, I would like to try living in more different countries with different weather because I prefer to have more experience of different feelings.

“try live”应为“try living”。“the different weathers”中“weather”不可数且不加定冠词。动词“am prefer”错误，应为“prefer”。“experience in the different feeling”应为“experience of different feelings”。