Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid repeating the same information. Instead of saying 'humid' twice, you can combine ideas to make your answer more natural and concise.

例: Currently, the weather in Karachi is hot and quite humid, which makes it feel warmer than usual.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by adding a bit more detail about why you prefer hot weather generally.

例: I usually prefer hot weather because I enjoy outdoor activities, but right now the high humidity is making me irritable, so I spend most of my time in the AC.

提案: Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'leaves a bad impression'. Be more specific about why wet weather is inconvenient for you.

例: I always prefer dry weather because I need to go outside for work, and wet weather makes me sweaty and uncomfortable, which affects my productivity.

提案: Try to answer directly and clearly. Avoid unnecessary words and improve sentence structure for clarity.

例: I don't check the weather forecast regularly, but sometimes I look at it to know the latest predictions before going out.

提案: Good content but avoid repetition like 'people people's'. Use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

例: Climate change has accelerated recently, causing unpredictable rainfall, thunderstorms, floods, and glacier melting, which makes people's lives more difficult.

提案: Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and clarify what you mean by 'easy to move'. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'some places'.

例: Yes, I have never seen snow, so I would like to visit a city that is always snowy, as well as cold places where it is easy to get around despite the weather.

× Climate change has occurred rapidly in recent years, causing unpredictable rainfalls, thunderstorm floods and glacier melt, which is making people people's life difficult.

✓ Climate change has occurred rapidly in recent years, causing unpredictable rainfalls, thunderstorm floods and glacier melt, which is making people's lives difficult.

The phrase 'people people's life' is incorrect because it redundantly repeats 'people' and uses 'life' in singular form. The correct possessive plural form is 'people's' and the noun should be plural 'lives' to match the plural subject. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.