Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时时态使用不准确，应使用现在时描述现状；句子结构较为简单且有重复，表达不够连贯。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I live in Shanghai, where the weather is generally comfortable and relaxing. However, during summer, it can get extremely hot, making me reluctant to go outside even for a minute.

提案: 回答中有口语化的填充词“like”，影响表达的自然性；句子较长且结构重复，建议简化句子并使用连接词提高连贯性。

例: Honestly, I prefer hot weather because I can wear my favorite clothes and enjoy going outside. In contrast, cold weather requires thick clothing, which I find uncomfortable.

提案: 表达重复且不够具体，缺少清晰的原因说明。建议避免重复，提供具体细节，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I definitely prefer wet weather because it improves my mood and makes me feel comfortable. On the other hand, dry weather often causes me some health issues.

提案: 语法错误较多，如动词形式和句子结构不完整；表达重复。建议注意语法正确性，简洁表达，并使用连接词。

例: Yes, I check the weather forecast almost every day, usually in the morning. This helps me prepare for the day and decide whether to bring an umbrella.

提案: 表达不清晰，语法错误多，句子结构混乱。建议理清思路，使用正确的时态和句子结构，具体说明气候变化的影响。

例: I believe climate change has caused summers to become much hotter in recent years, which affects my daily life and comfort.

提案: 表达重复且不够自然，词汇使用不准确。建议使用更地道的表达，避免重复，并具体说明原因。

例: Yes, I am eager to visit cities with different climates because experiencing various weather conditions helps me understand which environments I find comfortable.

× I lived in Shanghai and I think the weather here is very comfortable and make me relaxed.

✓ I live in Shanghai and I think the weather here is very comfortable and makes me relaxed.

这里用的是一般现在时态，因为学生描述的是现在的情况。'lived'是过去式，应改为现在式'live'。动词'make'应与主语'the weather'保持第三人称单数一致，改为'makes'。

× I lived in Shanghai and I think the weather here is very comfortable and make me relaxed.

✓ I live in Shanghai and I think the weather here is very comfortable and makes me relaxed.

主语'the weather'是第三人称单数，谓语动词'make'应加-s，变为'makes'，以保持主谓一致。

× Like I don't want, I don't want to go out of the home for one minute.

✓ Like I don't want to go out of the house for even one minute.

'don't want'后面应直接接动词不定式'to go'，且'home'前不加冠词，改为'the house'更自然。

× I don't want to go out of the home for one minute.

✓ I don't want to go out of the house for even one minute.

'go out of the home'表达不自然，通常说'go out of the house'。此外，'for one minute'改为'even one minute'更符合语境。

× I can wear the clothes which I like to go outside and to show myself,

✓ I can wear the clothes that I like to go outside and show myself,

关系代词用'that'更常见且自然，'to show myself'中第二个'to'可省略。

× I can wear the clothes which I like to go outside and to show myself,

✓ I can wear the clothes that I like to go outside and show myself,

动词不定式中，第二个'to'可以省略，使句子更简洁自然。

× I will not I will not have to wear an umbrella.

✓ I will not have to carry an umbrella.

'wear an umbrella'表达错误，正确用法是'carry an umbrella'。

× I think it changed a lot in the nearly years after climate change because the weather in summer it is totally hot than the last last few years.

✓ I think it has changed a lot in recent years after climate change because the weather in summer is totally hotter than in the last few years.

描述最近变化应使用现在完成时'have changed'。'nearly years'应为'recent years'。比较级'hotter'用于比较两者，且句子结构需调整。

× I think it changed a lot in the nearly years after climate change because the weather in summer it is totally hot than the last last few years.

✓ I think it has changed a lot in recent years after climate change because the weather in summer is totally hotter than in the last few years.

比较时应使用'than'后接比较对象，且'last last'重复，应改为'last few years'。

× I can touch different, different like weather and I can feel it in the different feelings.

✓ I can experience different kinds of weather and feel different feelings.

'touch weather'表达不当，应使用'experience'。'like weather'不合适，改为'different kinds of weather'。

× I can know if it is comfortable or uncomfortable comfortable for me.

✓ I can know if it is comfortable or uncomfortable for me.

句中重复了'adjective'，应删除多余的'comfortable'。