Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应注意语法完整性，例如在“the weather usually warm and sunny”中应加上动词“is”。此外，可以适当丰富细节，使回答更自然流畅。

例: I live in Brisbane, where the weather is usually warm and sunny. Summers can be really hot and humid, while winters are mild and quite comfortable.

提案: 避免使用多余词汇，如“prefer like”应简化为“prefer”。同时，可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I prefer hot weather because it makes me feel more energetic and happy. Moreover, I can wear light clothes and enjoy outdoor activities like swimming and going to the beach.

提案: 注意语法错误，如“carry”应改为“carrying”。此外，可以用连接词增强句子连贯性。

例: I prefer dry weather because it's more comfortable and makes it easier to plan my day. Also, I don't like getting wet or carrying an umbrella all the time.

提案: 回答中出现地名错误，应与前文保持一致。此外，句子结构可以更自然，避免突兀。

例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day, usually in the morning. Since I don't like rain, I want to make sure I'm prepared before I leave home.

提案: 注意语法一致性，如“Summer getting hotter”应改为“Summer is getting hotter”，并且“the winter are”应改为“the winters are”。可以使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I think climate change has made the weather more extreme. For example, summers are getting hotter, and winters are colder than before. Overall, the weather feels less stable than it used to be.

提案: 注意名词复数和冠词使用，如“weathers”应为“weathers”不常用，改为“climates”；“snowy city”前应加冠词“a”。句子结构应更完整。

例: Yes, I think it would be fun to visit places with different climates. For example, visiting a snowy city or very dry areas would be a new experience for me.

× I live in Brisbane and the weather usually warm and sunny.

✓ I live in Brisbane and the weather is usually warm and sunny.

句子中缺少系动词“is”，导致谓语不完整。应在“weather”和“usually”之间加上“is”表示现在时态。

× Summer can be really hot and humid but the winter is mild and comfortable.

✓ Summer can be really hot and humid but winter is mild and comfortable.

“winter”前不需要加定冠词“the”，因为这里指的是季节的一般情况。

× I prefer like hot weather because I can feel more energetic and happy.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I can feel more energetic and happy.

动词“prefer”后不应跟“like”，两者含义重复且结构错误，应直接用“prefer hot weather”。

× I don't like getting wet or carry an umbrella all the time.

✓ I don't like getting wet or carrying an umbrella all the time.

“like”后面应接动名词形式，故“carry”应改为“carrying”。

× I don't like rain, so I need to make sure I'm ready before I leave Rome.

✓ I don't like rain, so I need to make sure I'm ready before I leave home.

“Rome”是地名，与上下文不符，应改为“home”表示“离开家”。

× Summer getting hotter and the winter are colder than before.

✓ Summer is getting hotter and winter is colder than before.

缺少系动词“is”，且“winter”应为单数，谓语动词也应为单数形式“is”。

× Yes, I think it will be fun to visit places with different weathers.

✓ Yes, I think it will be fun to visit places with different weather.

“weather”通常不可数，不能用复数形式“weathers”。

× Like snowy city or very dry areas is new for me.

✓ Visiting snowy cities or very dry areas is new for me.

句子结构不完整，缺少主语，且“city”应为复数“cities”以匹配“areas”。