Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答内容较完整且有季节对比，但存在语法错误（如"it is often feel freezing"），建议注意动词形式和句子结构的正确性，同时可适当简化表达，使语言更自然流畅。

例: The weather where I live changes a lot with the seasons. In summer, temperatures often rise above 35 degrees, making it very hot outside. In contrast, winter is usually cold, with temperatures dropping below zero.

提案: 回答表达了观点和原因，但存在重复和拼写错误（如"sweet"应为"sweat"），且最后一句不完整（"cold weather is refreshed"），建议注意用词准确和句子完整性。

例: I prefer cold weather because I like exercising outside. When it's hot, I get tired quickly and sweat a lot, which makes it uncomfortable. Cold weather feels refreshing and more suitable for outdoor activities.

提案: 回答内容有逻辑，但多次出现拼写错误（"dusk"应为"dust"），且表达不够简洁自然，建议加强词汇准确性和句子流畅度。

例: I prefer wet weather because dry weather has a lot of dust, which can cause coughing and discomfort. Wet weather reduces dust and makes the air feel fresher.

提案: 回答内容完整且有例子，但存在词汇重复（"proper appropriate"）和冠词错误（"a umbrella"应为"an umbrella"），建议注意词汇搭配和冠词使用。

例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning on my phone before going out. This helps me decide what clothes to wear and whether to take an umbrella. For example, if rain is expected, I always bring an umbrella to stay dry.

提案: 回答内容较好，但存在词汇错误（"versions"应为"vehicles"），且语法需注意（"cutting down trees reduce"应为"reduces"），建议加强词汇准确性和语法一致性。

例: Climate change has caused serious problems like global warming. This is mainly due to increased greenhouse gas emissions from factories and vehicles. Also, deforestation reduces the number of trees that absorb carbon dioxide.

提案: 回答表达了观点和理由，但存在拼写错误（"comments"应为"climates"，"topic"应为"tropic"），且句子结构不够流畅，建议注意拼写和句子连贯性。

例: I would like to visit cities with different climates because it can broaden my horizons. For example, experiencing a colder or more tropical climate would help me learn how people adapt their lifestyles. I also think climate influences local culture, so I want to explore these differences.

× However, in winter the temperature usually drops below 0 and it is often feel freezing and cold.

✓ However, in winter the temperature usually drops below 0 and it often feels freezing and cold.

这里的主语是"it"，是第三人称单数，谓语动词"feel"应使用第三人称单数形式"feels"。

× For example, when I when the temperature rises, I feel tired quickly and sweet a lot, which makes exercising unpleasant.

✓ For example, when the temperature rises, I feel tired quickly and sweat a lot, which makes exercising unpleasant.

句中"when I when"是多余且错误的，应该去掉多余的"when"。另外，"sweet"应为"sweat"，表示出汗。

× In contrast, cold weather is refreshed.

✓ In contrast, cold weather is refreshing.

"refreshed"是过去分词，表示被刷新；这里应使用形容词"refreshing"，表示令人感到清爽。

× I prefer wet weather to dry weather because during dry weather there is lot of dusk in the air which can be harmful to our health.

✓ I prefer wet weather to dry weather because during dry weather there is a lot of dust in the air which can be harmful to our health.

"lot"前应加冠词"a"，且"dusk"（黄昏）应为"dust"（灰尘）。

× On the other hand, wet weather helps to reduce dusk and makes the air free fresher.

✓ On the other hand, wet weather helps to reduce dust and makes the air feel fresher.

"dusk"应为"dust"，"free"应为"feel"，表示使空气感觉更清新。

× Yes, I usually check weather forecast everyday morning on my phone before going outside.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning on my phone before going outside.

"weather forecast"前应加定冠词"the"，"everyday morning"应为"every morning"，"everyday"是形容词，表示日常的。

× This routine helps me plan my day better, such as choosing the proper appropriate clothing and deciding whether to take a umbrella.

✓ This routine helps me plan my day better, such as choosing the proper appropriate clothing and deciding whether to take an umbrella.

"a umbrella"前应使用"an"，因为"umbrella"以元音音素开头。

× I think the main reason is the increase in greenhouse gas emissions from factories and versions.

✓ I think the main reason is the increase in greenhouse gas emissions from factories and vehicles.

"versions"应为"vehicles"，表示车辆。

× Additionally, deforestation also contributes to the issue because cutting down trees reduce the Earth's ability to absorb carbon dioxide.

✓ Additionally, deforestation also contributes to the issue because cutting down trees reduces the Earth's ability to absorb carbon dioxide.

主语"cutting down trees"是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式"reduces"。

× I would like to visit other cities with different comments from where I live because I it can broaden my horizons.

✓ I would like to visit other cities with different climates from where I live because it can broaden my horizons.

"comments"应为"climates"，表示气候；"I it"多余，应去掉"I"。

× For example, experiencing A colder or more topic climate would help me understand how people adapt their lifestyles.

✓ For example, experiencing a colder or more tropical climate would help me understand how people adapt their lifestyles.

"A"应为小写"a"，"topic"应为"tropical"，表示热带的。