Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 자연스러운 영어 표현과 명확한 문장 구조를 사용하여 답변을 간결하고 이해하기 쉽게 개선해야 합니다.

例: The weather where I live is usually cloudy and rainy these days. I really enjoy the cool weather in autumn when the rain falls gently.

提案: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 불분명합니다. 선호 이유를 명확히 하고, 관련된 구체적인 설명을 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I prefer cold weather because I tend to sweat a lot in hot weather. Also, I enjoy using the air conditioner to stay cool, especially at night with my husband.

提案: 답변이 혼란스럽고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 질문에 대한 명확한 답변이 부족합니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel uncomfortable, especially during the summer when humidity is high.

提案: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만 문법과 표현이 부자연스럽습니다. 습관에 대해 직접 답하고, 빈도와 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I usually don't check the weather forecast because I don't like planning ahead. However, my husband always checks it before going out.

提案: 답변이 매우 간단하고 불완전하며, 구체적인 내용이 부족합니다. 기후 변화의 영향에 대해 명확하고 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I think climate change has caused the Earth to become hotter, which affects weather patterns and can lead to extreme weather events.

提案: 답변이 어색하고 문법적 오류가 있으며, 이유가 명확하지 않습니다. 방문하고 싶은 이유를 구체적으로 설명하고, 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it allows me to experience new weather and wear different clothes, like swimsuits or use umbrellas.

× Nowadays it's cloudy and rainy. Uh, or when it's forthcoming.

✓ Nowadays it's cloudy and rainy, or when it's coming.

The word 'forthcoming' is an adjective meaning 'about to happen' and is not used to describe weather conditions. The correct present participle form 'coming' should be used to indicate ongoing weather conditions. 'Forthcoming' is inappropriate here.

× When moisturizer is coming down, I love fall.

✓ When moisture is coming down, I love fall.

The word 'moisturizer' refers to a cosmetic product, which is incorrect in this context. The intended word is 'moisture', which refers to water in the air or rain. This is a pronoun/noun misuse.

× I prefer cold weather because I have a lot of sweat and high love.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I sweat a lot and love it.

The phrase 'have a lot of sweat' is unnatural; the verb 'sweat' should be used. Also, 'high love' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'love it' or 'like it a lot'. The quantifiers and expressions are misused.

× Air conditioner cooling air is my love.

✓ I love the air conditioner cooling the air.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. The subject 'I' should be explicit, and the verb phrase should be properly constructed. 'Air conditioner cooling air is my love' is incorrect pronoun and sentence structure.

× For my husband and me, always use a petitioner when at night.

✓ My husband and I always use a humidifier at night.

'Petitioner' is incorrect; likely the intended word is 'humidifier'. Also, the sentence lacks a subject and proper verb form. 'My husband and I' is the correct pronoun usage as the subject.

× I prefer dry weather because nowadays very very, very wet weather because rainy and it's summer day, high moisture weather is very, very good.

✓ I prefer dry weather because nowadays it is very wet and rainy during summer days, and high moisture weather is not good.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. Proper sentence structure requires clear subject-verb agreement and logical flow. The phrase 'very very, very wet weather because rainy' is incorrect and redundant.

× Cortana angry?

✓ Is the weather making you angry?

The phrase 'Cortana angry?' is unclear and ungrammatical. It seems to be a mishearing or typo. A proper question structure is needed.

× No, no, I have not that habit.

✓ No, no, I do not have that habit.

The phrase 'I have not that habit' is incorrect in modern English. The correct form uses 'do not have' to express negation with 'have' as a main verb.

× I don't like planning, but my husband like planning about weather.

✓ I don't like planning, but my husband likes planning about the weather.

Subject-verb agreement error with 'husband like' instead of 'husband likes'. Also, 'planning about weather' should be 'planning about the weather' for correct article usage.

× So when he, uh, when he plan to go out, he always check out the weather.

✓ So when he plans to go out, he always checks the weather.

Subject-verb agreement errors: 'he plan' should be 'he plans', and 'he always check' should be 'he always checks'.

× Because Earth is going to the hot, more hot and weather could change everything.

✓ Because the Earth is getting hotter and the weather could change everything.

Incorrect phrase 'going to the hot' should be 'getting hotter'. Also, 'Earth' requires the definite article 'the'. The sentence uses present continuous tense to describe ongoing change.

× Yeah, I love it because there are so many weather in other cities, so there are so many clothes and other things like umbrella or swim, swim clothes, other.

✓ Yeah, I love it because there is so much different weather in other cities, so there are many clothes and other things like umbrellas or swimwear.

'Weather' is uncountable, so 'there are so many weather' is incorrect; use 'there is so much weather'. Also, 'umbrella' should be plural 'umbrellas' to match 'many clothes'. 'Swim clothes' is better expressed as 'swimwear'.