Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more organized and clear. Start with a direct statement about the weather, then add specific details without redundancy. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases like 'it's kinda'.

例: The weather in the Philippines is generally hot and humid. Currently, it's the rainy season, so there are frequent showers, which make the atmosphere feel cooler and more comfortable.

提案: Make sure your answer is complete and clear. Avoid unfinished sentences and unclear words like 'wet something wet'. Provide reasons to support your preference.

例: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy outdoor activities and feel more energetic in warm temperatures. Cold weather makes me feel uncomfortable and less active.

提案: Improve clarity and grammar. Use complete sentences and explain your reasons clearly. Avoid vague phrases like 'I understanding outdoors'.

例: I prefer dry weather because I like spending time outdoors and enjoying the warmth of the sun. Wet weather, especially rain, makes me feel uncomfortable and limits my activities.

提案: Answer the question directly and clearly. Use present tense and avoid unnecessary words. Explain when and how often you check the forecast.

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving the house. It helps me prepare for the day, especially to know if it will rain.

提案: Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. Provide specific effects of climate change with examples. Avoid incomplete sentences.

例: Climate change has made the weather more unpredictable in recent years. For example, it is harder to know when it will rain, which affects farming and daily life.

提案: Clarify your answer and correct grammar. Explain why you want to visit those places and what you want to experience.

例: Yes, I have always dreamed of visiting cities with different climates. For instance, I want to experience snow and the beauty of spring, which are very different from the weather in the Philippines.

× I live in the Philippines, so basically the weather here is humid, it's very hot and since it's rainy season, summer's out, it's very cozy so it's kinda.

✓ I live in the Philippines, so basically the weather here is humid and very hot. Since it's the rainy season and summer is over, the weather is quite cozy.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence with multiple ideas joined improperly. Breaking it into clearer sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer hot weather. I'm not a fan of cold season or wet something wet and it's.

✓ I prefer hot weather. I'm not a fan of the cold season or wet weather.

The phrase 'wet something wet and it's' is incomplete and unclear. Replacing it with 'wet weather' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× I prefer dry weather because I understanding outdoors and feeling the warmth of the sun and cold makes me feel uncomfortable, especially when it's raining. Yeah.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I enjoy being outdoors and feeling the warmth of the sun. The cold makes me feel uncomfortable, especially when it's raining.

The verb 'understanding' is incorrectly used; it should be 'enjoy' to express preference. Also, the sentence is long and unclear, so splitting it improves clarity.

× Yes, I always visited my weather forecast and because I just feel like it's very convenient to know whether it's gonna rain or not. And yeah.

✓ Yes, I always visit the weather forecast because I feel it's very convenient to know whether it's going to rain or not.

The verb 'visited' is past tense but the adverb 'always' indicates a habitual action, so present tense 'visit' is correct. Also, 'my weather forecast' is incorrect; it should be 'the weather forecast.'

× So the effect of climate change on this interest is that you can predict anymore, though you know it's going to rain or not so many changes.

✓ The effect of climate change nowadays is that you cannot predict whether it will rain or not because there are so many changes.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Rephrasing it clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× Yes, actually it's always been my dream to leave a brother who worked there. So yeah, I can't wait to go there and experience the snow, the spring.

✓ Yes, actually it's always been my dream to live with my brother who works there. So yeah, I can't wait to go there and experience the snow and spring.

The phrase 'leave a brother who worked there' is incorrect; it should be 'live with my brother who works there.' Also, 'worked' should be present tense 'works' to indicate current situation. Adding 'and' between 'snow' and 'spring' improves sentence flow.