Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: حاول تحسين تركيب الجملة لتكون أكثر طبيعية ودقة، وتجنب التكرار مثل كلمة "the" مرتين. استخدم عبارات أكثر تحديدًا لوصف الطقس بدلاً من تعبير عام.

例: Usually, the weather in my city is hot because it is located near the beach.

提案: حاول استخدام تراكيب أكثر طبيعية وصحيحة نحويًا، وقدم تفاصيل داعمة بشكل مترابط باستخدام أدوات الربط.

例: I definitely prefer cold weather because I am allergic to heat. Therefore, when it gets very hot in my city, I usually stay indoors to avoid discomfort.

提案: استخدم تراكيب صحيحة مثل "prefer wet weather to dry weather" ووضح السبب بشكل أكثر تفصيلاً مع ربط الجمل.

例: I prefer wet weather to dry weather because my skin tends to get irritated when it's dry.

提案: حاول التعبير عن التكرار بشكل أكثر وضوحًا ودقة، واستخدم تراكيب صحيحة نحويًا مع ربط الجمل.

例: I usually check the weather forecast seven or eight times during the summer, but only two or three times in the winter.

提案: حاول تقديم رأي واضح ومحدد مع استخدام تراكيب صحيحة وأدوات ربط لتوضيح الأفكار بشكل أفضل.

例: To be honest, I am not sure why climate change has occurred recently, but I think it has caused noticeable changes in the weather patterns.

提案: حاول استخدام جمل أكثر ترابطًا وتجنب التكرار، ووضح الأسباب بشكل أكثر تحديدًا مع استخدام أدوات الربط.

例: Absolutely, I would love to visit cities with different climates, such as London and Moscow in winter, because they look beautiful during Christmas and New Year.

× At my city usually the the weather is hot because it's near of the beach.

✓ In my city, usually the weather is hot because it's near the beach.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect when referring to a city; 'in' should be used. Also, 'near of' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'near the beach'. Additionally, the sentence needs a comma after 'city' for clarity.

× When the weather is very hot at my city, I am never go out from my house.

✓ When the weather is very hot in my city, I never go out of my house.

The modal verb 'am' is incorrectly used before 'never go'. The correct form is 'I never go out'. Also, 'at my city' should be 'in my city', and the preposition 'from' should be 'of' when referring to leaving a place.

× I prefer wet weather than the dry weather 'cause my skin allergic to dry weather.

✓ I prefer wet weather to dry weather because my skin is allergic to dry weather.

The correct preposition after 'prefer' is 'to', not 'than'. Also, 'my skin allergic' is missing the verb 'is'. The informal 'cause' should be 'because' for clarity.

× Usually 7 times or 8 times in the summer, but in the winter it's from three to two time.

✓ Usually 7 or 8 times in the summer, but in the winter it's from two to three times.

The phrase 'from three to two time' is incorrect in order and number agreement. It should be 'from two to three times'. Also, 'time' should be plural 'times' when referring to multiple occurrences.

× To be clear with you, I don't know why the climate change recent years, but maybe of the change for the weather, it's changed.

✓ To be clear with you, I don't know why the climate has changed in recent years, but maybe because of the change in the weather, it has changed.

The sentence has multiple structural errors: 'climate change recent years' lacks a verb and preposition; it should be 'climate has changed in recent years'. 'Maybe of the change for the weather' is incorrect; it should be 'maybe because of the change in the weather'. Also, 'it's changed' is better as 'it has changed' for clarity.

× I really want to visit London in the winter and Moscow, either because they have some in the winter.

✓ I really want to visit London in the winter and Moscow as well because they have snow in the winter.

The phrase 'either because they have some in the winter' is unclear and incorrect. 'Either' is misused; 'as well' or 'too' is appropriate. Also, 'some' is vague; specifying 'snow' clarifies the meaning.