Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời có sự lặp lại không cần thiết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: The weather in my hometown varies a lot; during summer, it gets extremely hot, while in winter, it becomes very cold. Because of this, people often prefer to stay indoors during extreme weather.

提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

例: I prefer cold weather because it is more comfortable and refreshing. When it's cold, I feel more relaxed and it seems like time passes more slowly, which I enjoy.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và giải thích rõ ràng hơn về lý do bạn thích thời tiết khô.

例: I prefer dry weather because when it's wet, my bedroom feels damp and uncomfortable, which makes it hard for me to sleep well.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và nói rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp câu hợp lý để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I check the weather forecast every day because it helps me plan activities with my friends and reminds me to bring an umbrella if it might rain.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn. Hãy tránh nói ngắt quãng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời rõ ràng và thuyết phục hơn.

例: I think climate change has caused global temperatures to rise, which negatively affects our daily lives. For example, hotter weather makes people uncomfortable and can lead to health problems.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và nói rõ hơn về lý do bạn muốn trải nghiệm khí hậu khác biệt.

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it would be a valuable experience. It allows me to meet new people and learn about different ways of life.

× the weather at my hometown is like when it's hot, it is super hot and it, it, it is cold, it gonna be super cold

✓ the weather in my hometown is such that when it's hot, it is super hot and when it is cold, it is super cold

The phrase 'the weather at my hometown' should be 'the weather in my hometown' because 'in' is the correct preposition for locations like towns. Also, 'it gonna be super cold' is incorrect; it should be 'it is going to be super cold' to use the correct verb form and auxiliary verb. This correction addresses singular/plural and verb form issues.

× it gonna be super cold

✓ it is going to be super cold

'Gonna' is an informal contraction of 'going to' and should be avoided in formal speech. The correct modal verb phrase is 'is going to be' to indicate future tense.

× people cannot, don't want to go out

✓ people cannot or don't want to go out

The original sentence incorrectly combines 'cannot' and 'don't want' without a conjunction. Adding 'or' clarifies the meaning and corrects the pronoun usage.

× the cold weather makes our makes me to feel more about my life to the time I I I I think the time is the time is slower slower when the weather is cold

✓ the cold weather makes me feel more about my life; I think time feels slower when the weather is cold

The phrase 'makes our makes me to feel' is incorrect and redundant. The correct form is 'makes me feel'. Also, 'to the time I I I I think the time is the time is slower slower' is repetitive and unclear; it should be simplified to 'I think time feels slower'. This corrects pronoun misuse and sentence structure.

× my bedroom is unable to to to to me to get in to get to sleep

✓ my bedroom makes it hard for me to get to sleep

The original sentence misuses prepositions and is repetitive. 'Unable to me to get in to get to sleep' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses proper prepositions and clearer structure.

× So sometimes it's bring me depression

✓ So sometimes it brings me depression

The verb 'bring' should be in third person singular form 'brings' to agree with the subject 'it'. This corrects the subject-verb agreement and pronoun usage.

× I checked the weather forecast every day because it's it is important to me to set a schedule to my friend to go out

✓ I check the weather forecast every day because it is important to me to set a schedule with my friend to go out

The verb 'checked' is past tense but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'check' is appropriate. Also, 'set a schedule to my friend' should be 'set a schedule with my friend' to use the correct preposition.

× it's very important to bring a umbrella to go to school maybe

✓ it's very important to bring an umbrella to go to school maybe

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'umbrella'. This corrects the article usage.

× the climate change in recent years make the temperature on earth to increase and it affects negatively on our life

✓ climate change in recent years has made the temperature on Earth increase and it has affected our lives negatively

'Climate change' is singular, so the verb should be 'has made' not 'make'. Also, 'on earth' should be capitalized as 'on Earth'. 'Affects negatively on our life' is awkward; better is 'has affected our lives negatively'. This corrects singular/plural and verb tense issues.

× Example. We will get sweaty every time

✓ For example, we get sweaty all the time

'Example.' is incomplete; it should be 'For example,'. Also, 'will get sweaty every time' is awkward; present tense 'get sweaty all the time' fits better to describe a general effect. This corrects sentence structure and tense.

× go to another city that have another climate

✓ go to another city that has a different climate

'City' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'another climate' is better expressed as 'a different climate' for clarity. This corrects subject-verb agreement and adjective usage.

× UH is a good is a worthwhile experience to me

✓ It is a good and worthwhile experience for me

The original sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. Correcting it to 'It is a good and worthwhile experience for me' improves clarity and sentence structure.

× To meet other people to gain more experience is good

✓ Meeting other people and gaining more experience is good

The original sentence uses infinitives awkwardly. Using gerunds 'Meeting' and 'gaining' and connecting them with 'and' improves sentence flow and correctness.