Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但部分表达不够准确，如“could be”应改为“can be”，且句子稍显冗长。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达。

例: The weather where I live is quite unpredictable. In summer, it can be either very hot or quite cold, while in winter, temperatures sometimes drop below zero or rise above ten degrees.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词有误，如“a cold weather”应为“cold weather”，且句子结构不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意冠词使用。

例: I prefer cold weather because it's easier to stay warm by wearing layers, whereas it's harder to cool down in hot weather just by wearing light clothes.

提案: 回答内容具体，但存在语法错误，如“moisture air”应为“moist air”，“felt difficult to breathe”应为“find it difficult to breathe”。建议注意时态和词汇搭配。

例: I prefer wet weather because moist air makes me feel comfortable. In dry weather, I find it hard to breathe and sometimes get nosebleeds, which is very unpleasant.

提案: 回答表达了频率和原因，但时态使用不当，“I checked”应为“I check”。建议注意时态一致性，并使用更自然的表达。

例: I check the weather forecast about six times a day because the weather is very unpredictable and can change within minutes.

提案: 回答内容不够清晰，表达有误，如“heated by typhoon”不合适，且“3 * a year”表达不明确。建议使用准确的词汇和表达方式，具体说明影响。

例: I believe one main effect of climate change is the increase in typhoons during summer. Ten years ago, typhoons were rare in our city, but now we experience about three each year.

提案: 回答自然且内容完整，但“good days”表达较口语化，建议使用更具体的描述，如“pleasant weather”。

例: Yes, I would love to experience the Mediterranean climate because it offers pleasant weather throughout the year.

× Actually, I prefer the cold weather because you can withstand a cold weather easily by wearing warm clothes, but you can't keep yourself cool in a hot weather by wearing light clothes.

✓ Actually, I prefer the cold weather because you can withstand cold weather easily by wearing warm clothes, but you can't keep yourself cool in hot weather by wearing light clothes.

“weather”作为不可数名词，不需要加冠词“a”。这里“a cold weather”和“a hot weather”是错误的用法，应去掉冠词。

× In the dry weather I felt difficult to breathe and sometimes I would have bleeding noses which makes it very unpleasant.

✓ In dry weather I find it difficult to breathe and sometimes I have nosebleeds which make it very unpleasant.

“bleeding noses”应为“nosebleeds”，表示鼻出血的复数形式；“felt difficult to breathe”表达不自然，应改为“find it difficult to breathe”。此外，“makes”应与复数主语“nosebleeds”一致，改为“make”。

× I checked the weather forecast about 6 times a day.

✓ I check the weather forecast about 6 times a day.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“check”，而不是过去时“checked”。

× I think that the main effects of climate change is the typhoons in the summer.

✓ I think that the main effect of climate change is the typhoons in the summer.

主语“effects”是复数，谓语“is”是单数，主谓不一致。应将“effects”改为单数“effect”，与“is”保持一致。

× About 10 years ago our city was really heated by typhoon, but nowadays we have a typhoon about 3 * a year.

✓ About 10 years ago our city was really hit by a typhoon, but nowadays we have about 3 typhoons a year.

“heated by typhoon”用词错误，应为“hit by typhoon”；“a typhoon about 3 * a year”表达不正确，应改为“about 3 typhoons a year”，将数量词和名词复数形式正确搭配。