Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达稍有错误，且部分句子不够连贯。建议注意句子结构，避免语法错误，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I live in Beijing, which has four distinct seasons. Spring and autumn are mild and dry, making them perfect for walking. However, summers are very hot, and winters can be extremely cold, so you need a lot of energy to get through those seasons.

提案: 回答内容较好，但句子连接不够自然，建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富表达。

例: I don't particularly prefer cold or hot weather, but if I had to choose, I would pick hot weather because I can wear lighter clothes and move around more easily. Summer makes me feel energetic, whereas in winter, I often have to push myself just to go outside.

提案: 回答内容具体且有例子，但句子之间缺少连接词，建议增加连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I definitely prefer dry weather because I'm from the north and used to it. For example, when I visited Suzhou, a beautiful city, the humid air hit me like a wall as soon as I got off the train, which felt terrible.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和不完整句子，建议注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯，避免模糊表达。

例: I check the weather forecast every day because what I wear depends on the next day's weather. If it's raining, I usually stay indoors, but if it's sunny, I like to go out with my friends to take pictures. This has become part of my daily routine.

提案: 回答表达较简单，句子结构重复，建议丰富词汇和句型，使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: I think summers have become hotter in recent years. For example, June in Beijing used to be quite comfortable, and I could even wear long pants. However, now June is extremely hot, which many of my colleagues have also noticed.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议注意句子完整性和准确表达，避免使用口语化词汇。

例: Yes, definitely. I'm naturally curious about different climates. For instance, Harbin's extremely cold weather interests me, and I would love to experience snowball fights there and enjoy the unique weather conditions.

× But summer's really hot, winters really cold it.

✓ But summer's really hot, and winter's really cold.

原句中缺少连词，导致句子结构不完整。应在两个独立分句之间加上连词“and”，并且“winters”应为单数“winter's”，且“it”多余。

× Neither, but if I have to choose hot weather, I can wear less clothes and move around easily.

✓ Neither, but if I have to choose, I prefer hot weather because I can wear fewer clothes and move around easily.

原句中缺少主语和谓语的完整表达，且“less clothes”应为“fewer clothes”，因为“clothes”是可数名词。

× Summer makes me feel energetic, winter I have to push myself just to go outside.

✓ Summer makes me feel energetic, but in winter I have to push myself just to go outside.

原句缺少连词“but”，且“winter”前应加介词“in”表示时间。

× Every day what I wear depends on the next day's weather. Even we can't.

✓ Every day, what I wear depends on the next day's weather. Even we can't change it.

第二句“Even we can't.”不完整，缺少宾语，导致句子不通顺。应补充完整表达。

× Harbins really extreme cold interests me.

✓ Harbin's really extreme cold interests me.

地名“Harbins”应为“Harbin's”，表示所属关系，且“Harbin”是单数名词，不加复数形式。