Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达稍显不自然，且部分句子冗长。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达方式。

例: I live in Changsha, where the weather is quite unpredictable. For example, it can be sunny and pleasant in the morning, which I enjoy, but it often rains in the afternoon, which can be annoying.

提案: 回答不完整且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，避免重复，并使用连贯的句子。

例: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy wearing cozy clothes and drinking hot drinks. Also, cold weather is comfortable for outdoor activities like hiking or mountain climbing.

提案: 表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误。建议使用正确的句型和词汇，明确表达观点并提供具体理由。

例: I prefer wet weather because it often brings fresh air, which improves air quality. This makes me feel comfortable and refreshed when I exercise outdoors.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达重复，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going on a trip or doing sports. This helps me decide whether to change my plans or bring an umbrella to avoid the rain.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免重复，并更清晰地阐述观点。

例: In recent years, many cities have experienced unusually hot summers. I believe this is mainly due to increased carbon dioxide emissions caused by the growing number of cars on the road, which leads to global warming.

提案: 回答不连贯且有语法错误，表达重复。建议组织清晰的句子，避免重复，并具体说明原因。

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it would be an interesting experience. For example, I want to experience very hot or rainy weather to gain a deeper impression of those places.

× Sometimes in the morning it's a sunny and pleasant weather, I really enjoy it.

✓ Sometimes in the morning the weather is sunny and pleasant, I really enjoy it.

“weather”是不可数名词，前面不需要使用冠词“a”，应直接说“the weather”。

× But after lunch it may become a rainy day, which makes me feel really annoyed.

✓ But after lunch it may become rainy, which makes me feel really annoyed.

“rainy”是形容词，描述天气时不需要用“a rainy day”，直接用“rainy”即可。

× Sometimes in the morning it's a sunny and pleasant weather, I really enjoy it.

✓ Sometimes in the morning the weather is sunny and pleasant, I really enjoy it.

形容词顺序应为“sunny and pleasant”，且“weather”前不加冠词。

× Also, I also it is comfortable in cold weather to go out for a sport such as hiking or climbing the mountains.

✓ Also, I find it comfortable in cold weather to go out for a sport such as hiking or climbing the mountains.

句中“also it is”结构不正确，应使用“find it”表达感受。

× Also, I also it is comfortable in cold weather to go out for a sport such as hiking or climbing the mountains.

✓ Also, I find it comfortable in cold weather to go out for sports such as hiking or climbing mountains.

“go out for a sport”应改为“go out for sports”，且“climbing the mountains”中“the”不必要。

× The weather makes me.

✓ The weather makes me happy.

句子不完整，缺少谓语补语，需补充完整表达。

× I prefer wet weather because I think in wet weather when I go out to do some sports, I can fresh, I can bring more fresh air.

✓ I prefer wet weather because I think when I go out to do some sports in wet weather, I can feel fresh and breathe more fresh air.

“can fresh”用词错误，应为“can feel fresh”；“bring more fresh air”表达不当，应为“breathe more fresh air”。

× The air quality improved a lot in that weather and it makes me feel really comfortable and fresh.

✓ The air quality improves a lot in that weather and it makes me feel really comfortable and fresh.

描述一般事实时应使用一般现在时，“improved”应改为“improves”。

× Before I go out for a trip or do some other sports, I will check the weather forecast so that I can choose change the plan or take a umbrella along with me.

✓ Before I go out for a trip or do some other sports, I will check the weather forecast so that I can choose to change the plan or take an umbrella with me.

“choose change”缺少不定式“to”；“a umbrella”冠词错误，应为“an umbrella”；“along with me”多余，简化为“with me”。

× I can change my plan so that I will not go to the rain.

✓ I can change my plan so that I will not go out in the rain.

“go to the rain”表达错误，应为“go out in the rain”。

× Many cities this years have experienced unusually hot summers.

✓ Many cities these years have experienced unusually hot summers.

“this years”应为复数形式“these years”。

× I think the main reason is the increase in carbon dioxide emissions with the number of cars running on the road rise significantly.

✓ I think the main reason is the increase in carbon dioxide emissions as the number of cars running on the road rises significantly.

“number of cars”作为主语，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数“rises”。

× This lead this lead to the global warming.

✓ This leads to global warming.

主语“this”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应为“leads”；重复“this lead”错误。

× I want to have a try about.

✓ I want to have a try.

“have a try”后不需要“about”，句子结构错误。

× I want to try some too hot or too rainy days.

✓ I want to try experiencing some very hot or very rainy days.

“try some too hot or too rainy days”结构不完整，应补充动词“experiencing”使句子完整。

× It it, it can give me a deep impression.

✓ It can give me a deep impression.

重复“it”错误，应删除多余词语。