Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“this make the weather very worse”和“when humanity is high and we feel even more harder”。建议注意主谓一致，使用正确的词汇（humidity而非humanity），并简洁表达。

例: The weather in my area is usually sunny, but the high humidity makes it feel uncomfortable and hotter than it actually is.

提案: 回答较为自然，但句子结构稍显重复，且“it's temperature is good”应为“its temperature is comfortable”。建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer moderate weather, so I love autumn because it's cool and comfortable. Moreover, the temperature during autumn makes it easier to sleep well.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱，如“this kind of situation is really ignoring”不合适。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免语法错误。

例: I definitely prefer dry weather because high humidity makes everything feel damp and uncomfortable, which can be quite annoying.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“have it of checking”和“go to traveling because go traveling”。建议简洁表达并避免重复。

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going out with my friends or traveling to make sure the weather is suitable.

提案: 表达不够连贯，且“the weather got harder and harder”不准确，应具体说明天气变化。建议使用更准确的词汇和完整句子。

例: I believe global warming is the most serious effect of climate change recently, causing extreme weather and increasing health risks like heatstroke.

提案: 回答较好，但最后一句不完整且表达不清。建议完整表达担忧并使用连接词。

例: Absolutely. I would like to visit cities with different climates, such as France and Spain, although I am concerned about the heatwaves and their impact on people's health.

× The weather of my district is sunny, however its humidity is quite high and this make the weather very worse because when humanity is high and we feel even more harder.

✓ The weather of my district is sunny, however its humidity is quite high and this makes the weather much worse because when humidity is high we feel even harder.

主谓一致错误，主语是单数"this"，谓语动词应为第三人称单数形式"makes"。另外，"humanity"应为"humidity"，"more harder"是双重比较级，应改为"harder"。

× The weather of my district is sunny, however its humidity is quite high and this make the weather very worse because when humanity is high and we feel even more harder.

✓ The weather of my district is sunny, however its humidity is quite high and this makes the weather much worse because when humidity is high we feel even harder.

"very worse"是不正确的用法，"worse"已经是比较级，不能与"very"连用，应使用"much worse"。"even more harder"是错误的双重比较级，应改为"even harder"或"harder"。

× The weather of my district is sunny, however its humidity is quite high and this make the weather very worse because when humanity is high and we feel even more harder.

✓ The weather of my district is sunny, however its humidity is quite high and this makes the weather much worse because when humidity is high we feel even harder.

"humanity"应为"humidity"，前者意为"人类"，后者意为"湿度"，语境中应使用"humidity"。

× I will say I choose the middle, that's why I love autumn the most because it's cool weather, I won't feel really sticky but cool and comfortable.

✓ I would say I choose the middle; that's why I love autumn the most because the weather is cool, I don't feel really sticky but cool and comfortable.

"I will say"在此语境中不合适，表达假设或偏好应使用"I would say"。"it's cool weather"应改为"the weather is cool"，更符合英语表达习惯。

× And autumn is the best season for sleeping because it's temperature is good.

✓ And autumn is the best season for sleeping because its temperature is good.

"it's"是"it is"的缩写，表示"它是"，此处应使用物主代词"its"表示"它的"。

× I definitely prefer dry weather because in my district the humidity is really high and it's wet everywhere and this kind of situation is really ignoring because most of the thing cannot use because it's.

✓ I definitely prefer dry weather because in my district the humidity is really high and it's wet everywhere and this kind of situation is really annoying because most of the things cannot be used because of it.

"most of the thing"应为复数形式"most of the things"。

× I definitely prefer dry weather because in my district the humidity is really high and it's wet everywhere and this kind of situation is really ignoring because most of the thing cannot use because it's.

✓ I definitely prefer dry weather because in my district the humidity is really high and it's wet everywhere and this kind of situation is really annoying because most of the things cannot be used because of it.

"ignoring"用法错误，应为形容词"annoying"表示令人烦恼的。

× Yes I have to have it of checking the weathers forecast.

✓ Yes, I have to check the weather forecast.

句子结构混乱，"have to have it of checking"不合语法，应简化为"have to check"。"weathers"应为不可数名词"weather"。

× Yes I have to have it of checking the weathers forecast.

✓ Yes, I have to check the weather forecast.

"weathers"错误，"weather"是不可数名词，不用复数形式。

× I usually check it when I want to hang out with my friends like go to traveling because go traveling because I need to forecast.

✓ I usually check it when I want to hang out with my friends, like going traveling, because I need to know the forecast.

句子结构不完整且重复，"like go to traveling because go traveling because"不合语法，应改为"like going traveling because"。

× I usually check it when I want to hang out with my friends like go to traveling because go traveling because I need to forecast.

✓ I usually check it when I want to hang out with my friends, like going traveling, because I need to know the forecast.

"go to traveling"用法错误，动词后接动名词应为"going traveling"。

× I think global warming is the most. Problematic effects of climate change in recent years the weather got harder and harder and many people got heart stroke.

✓ I think global warming is the most problematic effect of climate change in recent years. The weather has become harsher and many people have suffered from heat stroke.

句子断句错误，"the most. Problematic effects"应连写为"the most problematic effect"。"got harder"表达不准确，应为"has become harsher"。"got heart stroke"应为"have suffered from heat stroke"。

× I think global warming is the most. Problematic effects of climate change in recent years the weather got harder and harder and many people got heart stroke.

✓ I think global warming is the most problematic effect of climate change in recent years. The weather has become harsher and many people have suffered from heat stroke.

"harder"用于描述天气不合适，应使用"harsher"表示更严酷。

× I think global warming is the most. Problematic effects of climate change in recent years the weather got harder and harder and many people got heart stroke.

✓ I think global warming is the most problematic effect of climate change in recent years. The weather has become harsher and many people have suffered from heat stroke.

"effects"应为单数"effect"，因为前面用的是"the most"，表示最高级，后面应接单数。

× Absolutely. I would like to visit other cities that suffered from heat waves like France and Spain.

✓ Absolutely. I would like to visit other cities that suffer from heat waves, like France and Spain.

时态错误，描述一般事实应使用一般现在时"suffer"，而非过去时"suffered"。

× I've heard many people have suffered from heatstroke during these unusually hot summer and I worry about.

✓ I've heard many people have suffered from heatstroke during these unusually hot summers and I worry about it.

"summer"应为复数"summers"，因为指多个夏天。句尾"I worry about"缺少宾语，应补充"it"。