Weather— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
What's the weather like where you live?
受験者
At the moment it's pretty sunny, but usually it rains a lot because I live in the north of Germany and in Hamburg and Hamburg is close to the sea, so there's always a lot of rain and many clouds.
試験官
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
受験者
I prefer cold temperatures because I don't like it when it's too hot outside. I yeah, get sweaty very easily and I prefer to stay inside when it's hot outside, but I like going out, so I need cooler temperatures for that.
試験官
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
受験者
I definitely prefer dry weather because I think nobody likes to get wet and I also have trouble bringing my umbrella with me when I go outside and the weather forecast said it was going to rain.
試験官
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
受験者
I checked the weather forecast every day, usually in the morning before I leave the house because I want to know if I have to bring an umbrella or not. But yeah, sometimes I don't care about the weather. I just go outside and I mean, I take a look out of the window.
試験官
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
受験者
I think one significant effect is that the temperature raises like everywhere in the world. It doesn't matter if in Germany or in the Antarctica, because everywhere you have the problem that it's getting hotter.
試験官
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
受験者
Yes, I would really enjoy visiting a country or town. Can be in Germany too where there is more sun during the year because in Hamburg the sunny days are very rare. Usually it's it rains a lot.
評価
総合
Part 1
What's the weather like where you live?
スコア: 75.0提案: Versuchen Sie, Ihre Antwort klarer und prägnanter zu strukturieren, indem Sie Wiederholungen vermeiden und die Sätze besser verbinden. Zum Beispiel könnten Sie die Informationen über Hamburg und das Wetter in einem Satz zusammenfassen, um Redundanz zu vermeiden.
例: Currently, it's quite sunny, but usually, Hamburg, being a northern city near the sea, experiences a lot of rain and cloudy days.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
スコア: 80.0提案: Vermeiden Sie Füllwörter wie "yeah" und formulieren Sie Ihre Antwort flüssiger. Nutzen Sie außerdem verbindende Wörter, um Ihre Gründe klarer darzustellen.
例: I prefer cold weather because I get sweaty easily when it's hot. Therefore, I like cooler temperatures since I enjoy going outside.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
スコア: 70.0提案: Ihre Antwort enthält einige unklare und redundante Teile. Versuchen Sie, Ihre Meinung klarer auszudrücken und vermeiden Sie unnötige Details, die nicht direkt zur Frage passen.
例: I definitely prefer dry weather because getting wet is uncomfortable, and I find it inconvenient to carry an umbrella.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
スコア: 65.0提案: Vermeiden Sie Zeitfehler (z.B. 'checked' statt 'check') und Füllwörter. Strukturieren Sie Ihre Antwort klarer und verwenden Sie verbindende Wörter, um Ihre Gewohnheiten zu erklären.
例: I check the weather forecast every morning before leaving the house to decide if I need an umbrella. However, sometimes I just look out the window and go outside without checking.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
スコア: 70.0提案: Verbessern Sie die Grammatik und Wortwahl, um Ihre Meinung klarer und präziser auszudrücken. Verwenden Sie außerdem verbindende Wörter, um Ihre Aussage zu strukturieren.
例: I believe a significant effect of climate change is the global rise in temperatures, affecting places from Germany to Antarctica.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
スコア: 75.0提案: Vermeiden Sie unvollständige Sätze und Wiederholungen. Strukturieren Sie Ihre Antwort klarer und verwenden Sie verbindende Wörter, um Ihre Gedanken flüssig auszudrücken.
例: Yes, I would enjoy visiting places, even within Germany, that have sunnier climates since Hamburg usually has many rainy days.
文法
× I checked the weather forecast every day, usually in the morning before I leave the house because I want to know if I have to bring an umbrella or not.
✓ I check the weather forecast every day, usually in the morning before I leave the house because I want to know if I have to bring an umbrella or not.
The sentence describes a habitual action, so the present simple tense 'check' should be used instead of the past tense 'checked'. Using the past tense here is incorrect because it implies the action happened only in the past, not regularly.
× Usually it's it rains a lot.
✓ Usually it rains a lot.
The phrase 'it's it rains a lot' contains an unnecessary repetition of the subject 'it'. The correct form is 'Usually it rains a lot.' to maintain subject-verb agreement and sentence clarity.
× I think one significant effect is that the temperature raises like everywhere in the world.
✓ I think one significant effect is that the temperature rises everywhere in the world.
The verb 'raise' is transitive and requires an object, while 'rise' is intransitive and used for temperatures increasing. Therefore, 'rises' is the correct verb form here to describe the temperature increasing globally.
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