Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免重复和不连贯。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持。

例: I live in a place with four distinct seasons. In winter, the temperature is very low, often below freezing, while in summer, it can get quite hot, sometimes reaching over 30 degrees Celsius.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达重复，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连词连接句子，使表达更自然流畅。

例: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy sunny days. The warmth makes me feel energetic and helps me stay positive when facing challenges.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不清晰的问题，建议用更准确的词汇和句子结构表达原因，避免重复。

例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes my clothes damp, which is uncomfortable and inconvenient.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议用简单句子清楚说明习惯和频率，并用连词连接。

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every day. This helps me decide what clothes to wear.

提案: 回答内容不完整且有语法错误，建议补充具体影响并用连词连接句子，使表达更完整。

例: I think climate change has led to more extreme weather events, such as hotter summers and severe storms. For example, glaciers have been melting rapidly, which affects water supply.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简洁表达愿望并说明原因，使用连词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. Since my city is very wet, I want to experience living in a dry climate.

× Remind me to have Four Seasons.

✓ I experience four seasons.

这里'seasons'是复数形式，表示一年中的四个季节，原句中表达不清楚且用词不当，应改为'I experience four seasons'来正确表达有四个季节。

× When it comes to winter the temperature will very low and it was the summer it had a high temperature.

✓ When it comes to winter, the temperature is very low, and in summer, it is very high.

原句中'temperature will very low'缺少动词be，且时态混乱。描述季节气温时应使用一般现在时，表示习惯性事实。

× I prefer hot weather because I really like sunny because I think it give me warmth to and give me the power to resolve the problems when I saw it.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I really like sunny days; I think they give me warmth and the power to solve problems when I see them.

原句中'it'指代不明，且动词单复数不一致，应使用复数'they'指代'sunny days'，动词也需相应变为复数形式。

× I prefer dry weather because I hate that in the wet weather my clothes are wet so I couldn't wear them before the weather became Wet Wet.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I hate that in wet weather my clothes get wet, so I can't wear them before the weather becomes dry.

原句中'became Wet Wet'重复且时态不对，应使用一般现在时'becomes dry'，且表达应更清晰。

× Yes, I have the habit of the checking the weather or forecast.

✓ Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather or forecast.

'the checking'中'the'不应出现在动名词前，去掉'the'更符合英语习惯。

× Sometimes I everyday can see the weather forecast because I can choose the suit to.

✓ Sometimes I can see the weather forecast every day because I can choose the suitable clothes.

'Sometimes I everyday can see'语序错误，应为'I can see the weather forecast every day'。另外，'choose the suit to'表达不完整，应为'choose the suitable clothes'。

× I think climate change has caused more extremely weather in centers such as very hot summers and severe storms.

✓ I think climate change has caused more extreme weather events such as very hot summers and severe storms.

'extremely weather'中'adverb + noun'搭配错误，应使用形容词'extreme'修饰'noun'。

× For example, the Ice river river was decreased so this.

✓ For example, the ice river has decreased because of this.

'river river'重复且用词不当，应为'singular'形式'river'，且动词时态应为现在完成时。

× Yes, I like to visit other cities that have different climate from my city because I think my my city is very wet, so I want to experience the dry weather to live there.

✓ Yes, I like to visit other cities that have different climates from my city because I think my city is very wet, so I want to experience dry weather by living there.

'different climate'应为复数'different climates'，表示多个不同的气候类型。