Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to make your sentences grammatically correct and complete. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, clearly describe the weather and how it affects your activities.

例: The weather where I live is very pleasant because it is neither too hot nor too cold. I really enjoy spending time outdoors, especially during the dry season. However, during the rainy season, it can be a bit inconvenient to go outside.

提案: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

例: I usually prefer cold weather because there are many kinds of fruits and vegetables available in winter. Also, during this season, we can cook different kinds of curries which I enjoy very much.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Make sure to answer the question directly and provide specific reasons with supporting details. Avoid incomplete sentences.

例: I usually prefer dry weather because it is easier to go outside and do activities. Wet weather can be inconvenient and sometimes causes problems like flooding.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your sentences and use correct grammar. Provide specific details about when and how often you check the forecast.

例: Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast, especially when the sky looks gloomy. I usually check it once or twice a day before going outside.

提案: Your answer is unclear and off-topic. Make sure to understand the question and provide relevant, specific details about the effects of climate change. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure.

例: In recent years, climate change has caused extreme weather events like floods and droughts. This has affected both the environment and people's lives negatively.

提案: Your answer is somewhat understandable but incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your sentences and provide clear reasons for your preferences.

例: I would like to visit cities with different climates because since childhood, I have dreamed of visiting snowy places like Emery, USA. I want to experience the difference in climate and enjoy the snow.

× The weather where I live is very enjoyable because it is either too hot nor too cold and spending time outdoors really enjoyable and during the rainy season it.

✓ The weather where I live is very enjoyable because it is neither too hot nor too cold, and spending time outdoors is really enjoyable during the rainy season.

The conjunction 'either...nor' is incorrect; the correct pair is 'neither...nor' to express two negative alternatives. Also, the sentence lacks the verb 'is' before 'really enjoyable', and the phrase 'during the rainy season it' is incomplete and misplaced. The corrected sentence uses proper conjunctions and completes the sentence structure.

× I usually prefer cold because they because there are many there are many kinds of visible found in winter and by this weekend we can make different kind of Curry.

✓ I usually prefer cold because there are many kinds of vegetables found in winter, and by this weekend we can make different kinds of curry.

The pronoun 'they' is unnecessary and confusing here. 'Kinds' is plural, so 'kind' should be plural as well. 'Visible' is a typo for 'vegetables'. Also, 'different kind of Curry' should be 'different kinds of curry' to agree in number and use lowercase for 'curry' as it is a common noun.

× I usually prefer bad weather because some during the wet weather there are some.

✓ I usually prefer bad weather because during the wet weather there are some advantages.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. The phrase 'because some during the wet weather there are some' is fragmented. The correction completes the sentence by adding a noun 'advantages' to clarify the meaning.

× Yes, I have a habit to checking a forecast, especially when the sky is being gloomy and I wanna go outside and.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the forecast, especially when the sky is gloomy and I want to go outside.

The phrase 'have a habit to checking' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'of' followed by the gerund 'checking'. 'A forecast' should be 'the forecast' as it refers to a specific forecast. 'Being gloomy' is better as 'is gloomy' for natural description. 'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is more appropriate.

× There are many climate change in a recent year like example of it in recent years.

✓ There have been many climate changes in recent years; for example, ...

'Climate change' is an uncountable noun but can be pluralized as 'climate changes' when referring to different types or instances. 'In a recent year' conflicts with 'in recent years'; the plural form is more appropriate. The sentence is incomplete and needs continuation after 'for example'.

× In recent years climbing stairs has profound effect environment and society.

✓ In recent years, climate change has had a profound effect on the environment and society.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'climbing stairs' which seems out of context. It likely intended 'climate change'. Also, 'has profound effect environment and society' lacks prepositions and articles. The corrected sentence adds 'had', 'a', and 'on' to complete the meaning.

× I would like to visit different cities of weather because from the childhood I had dream of to visit a snowy city, snowy country like Emory, USA and I wanna see the climate difference between.

✓ I would like to visit cities with different weather because since childhood I have dreamed of visiting a snowy city or snowy country like Emery, USA, and I want to see the climate differences between them.

'Different cities of weather' is incorrect; 'cities with different weather' is correct. 'From the childhood' should be 'since childhood'. 'Had dream of to visit' should be 'have dreamed of visiting'. 'Emory' is corrected to 'Emery' assuming a proper noun. 'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is better. The sentence was incomplete and is now completed.