Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答较为自然且内容完整，但可以增加一些连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复使用“weather”。

例: The weather where I live is quite changeable. For instance, summers are very hot, whereas winters bring cold air and sometimes even snow.

提案: 回答表达清晰，但句子之间缺少连接词，且“While the weather is hot”表达略显生硬。建议使用更自然的连接词并丰富细节。

例: Actually, I prefer cold weather because I can use a warm blanket and enjoy a hot cup of tea. In contrast, hot weather often makes me feel uncomfortable and annoyed.

提案: 回答内容具体且结构合理，但“wet weather”与“dry weather”之间的转折连接词可以更自然。

例: I prefer dry weather since wet weather makes me feel uncomfortable due to the humidity. Moreover, dry days allow me to enjoy outdoor activities like swimming and running.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“about a few times”不自然，且“go to the outside”表达不准确。建议使用更地道的表达并注意语法。

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast a few times a week, especially when I plan to go outside.

提案: 回答中“we have met”用词不当，且“drains”用词错误，应为“droughts”或其他自然灾害。建议使用准确词汇并丰富细节。

例: I believe climate change has caused more frequent and severe weather events recently, such as hurricanes, floods, and droughts, which negatively impact the environment.

提案: 句子结构不够自然，“the cities which the weather is often raining”表达不准确。建议使用更地道的表达方式。

例: Sure, since the weather where I live is often sunny and hot, I would like to visit cities that usually have rainy weather.

× I check the weather forecast about a few times a week, especially when I plan to go to the outside.

✓ I check the weather forecast a few times a week, especially when I plan to go outside.

这里“about a few times a week”中的“about”用法不当，应该直接说“a few times a week”表示频率；另外，“go to the outside”中的“the”是不必要的，正确表达是“go outside”，表示去户外。

× I think the climate change in recent years has some negative effects on the environment.

✓ I think climate change in recent years has some negative effects on the environment.

“climate change”是不可数名词，不需要加定冠词“the”。

× we have met more frequent and severe weather events such as hurricanes, floods and drains.

✓ we have met more frequent and severe weather events such as hurricanes, floods and drains.

“drains”应为“droughts”（干旱），因为“drains”意思是排水沟，不符合气候变化的语境。此处应使用复数形式的正确名词。

× I would like to visit the cities which the weather is often raining.

✓ I would like to visit the cities where the weather is often rainy.

“which the weather is often raining”结构不正确，应改为“where the weather is often rainy”，用“where”引导定语从句，且“raining”应改为形容词“rainy”修饰“weather”。