Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误和多余词汇，保持句子简洁且连贯。可以先直接描述天气特点，然后补充具体细节。

例: The weather in my city is quite changeable, but it is usually hot and humid because it is located in a basin.

提案: 回答时应注意句子结构的完整性和连贯性，避免重复表达。可以使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy swimming, which is best during warm days. Also, cold weather limits outdoor activities for me.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，应避免双重否定，且表达情绪时要用准确的词汇。

例: Honestly, I don't like either dry or wet weather because dry weather makes me feel irritated, and wet weather affects my mood and appetite.

提案: 回答应完整表达习惯和频率，避免句子不完整。可以补充具体时间和原因。

例: Yes, I have been checking the weather forecast since middle school. I usually check it every day before going out to plan my activities accordingly.

提案: 回答应更清晰表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。可以具体说明人类活动如何影响气候变化。

例: I believe climate change is mainly caused by human activities, such as overusing natural resources without considering the environmental consequences.

提案: 回答应注意时态和句子结构的正确性，表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, after graduation, I traveled to a coastal city where I enjoyed working on the beach and feeling the sea breeze.

× Since I live in a basin city, the weather there is changeable and they all always hot and humid and.

✓ Since I live in a basin city, the weather there is changeable and it is always hot and humid.

句中使用了复数代词'they'指代单数名词'weather'，应使用单数代词'it'。此外，'all always'重复，应简化为'always'。

× And if there was cold, there's lots of activities I cannot do outside.

✓ And if it is cold, there are lots of activities I cannot do outside.

条件句中描述一般事实，应使用一般现在时态，'was'改为'is'。此外，'there's'应改为复数形式'there are'，因为后面接复数名词'activities'。

× To be honest, I don't prefer neither of it because the dry weather makes me. Angry and wet weather often makes me up, down and and eating.

✓ To be honest, I don't prefer either of them because dry weather makes me angry and wet weather often makes me feel up and down and eat a lot.

'neither of it'错误，'it'应改为复数代词'them'，且'neither'与否定词'don't'重复，应改为'either'。'makes me. Angry'句子断裂，应连成'makes me angry'。'makes me up, down and and eating'表达不清，应改为'makes me feel up and down and eat a lot'。

× Almost every day I went out I would check the weather forecast to make sure I will be able to.

✓ Almost every day I went out, I would check the weather forecast to make sure I was able to.

句中时态不一致，前半句为过去时，后半句应保持过去时，'will be able to'应改为'was able to'。

× I think it's due to the human activities because people are always used to natural resources that they don't they don't consider about what they are in love.

✓ I think it's due to human activities because people always use natural resources and they don't consider what they are doing.

'used to'误用，应为'use'。'consider about'错误，'consider'后不加介词'about'。句子结构混乱，需简化表达。

× For example, I have traveled to an coastal city when I was after graduate and I like to work on the beach and feel the wind.

✓ For example, I have traveled to a coastal city after I graduated, and I like to work on the beach and feel the wind.

'an coastal'错误，'coastal'以辅音音素开头，应使用不定冠词'a'。'when I was after graduate'表达不正确，应改为'after I graduated'。