Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, which affects naturalness and effectiveness. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: I live in the South of Vietnam, where the weather is usually hot and humid. During summer, the weather becomes quite unpredictable, which can be frustrating at times.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain your preferences clearly. Avoid repetition and ensure your ideas are fully expressed.

例: I prefer cold weather because it feels comfortable, especially when I hang out with friends. Also, I enjoy wearing different types of clothes during cold weather.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and better structured. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy. Try to provide specific reasons for your preference.

例: I usually prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and makes it easier to go out and do activities. However, sometimes my mood affects my preference.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Try to use complete sentences and linking words to make your response clearer and more natural. Also, avoid redundancy.

例: No, I don't usually check the weather forecast. Instead, I look at the sky in the morning to see if it's sunny or windy. I prefer to enjoy the day based on what I observe.

提案: Your answer contains several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use accurate vocabulary and sentence structures. Provide specific effects and suggest solutions clearly using linking words.

例: I believe climate change affects people's health and animal habitats due to pollution and global warming. Therefore, governments should develop and implement effective measures to address these issues.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and has unclear expressions. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to explain your ideas clearly. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

例: Yes, I sometimes think about traveling to cities with different climates. For example, I would like to visit the countryside or a village with a relaxing environment because I think it would be more comfortable.

× In the summer is even enchant unpredictable weather.

✓ In the summer, there is even more unpredictable weather.

The original sentence lacks a subject and uses 'enchant' incorrectly. The correct structure requires 'there is' to indicate existence (There be issue) and 'more' to compare the degree of unpredictability. Also, 'enchant' is not appropriate here; 'more' fits the comparative context.

× So I quite I'm quite annoyed with this weather.

✓ So, I'm quite annoyed with this weather.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced words ('I quite I'm quite'). The correct sentence removes the extra 'I quite' and adds a comma after 'So' for clarity.

× I like cold but not raining because it is quite comfortable and pleased when I need to hang out with friends and I can wear wear clothes in various types, so and.

✓ I like cold but not rain because it is quite comfortable and pleasant when I need to hang out with friends, and I can wear various types of clothes.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'raining' should be 'rain' after 'not'; 'pleased' should be 'pleasant' to describe the weather; 'wear wear' is a repetition; 'in various types' is incorrect, should be 'various types of clothes'; 'so and' is incomplete and unnecessary. The corrected sentence fixes these errors and improves clarity.

× I think dry weather is quite more comfortable and it is easy to hang out and go out every day and maybe it's fine.

✓ I think dry weather is much more comfortable, and it is easy to hang out and go out every day, so maybe it's fine.

The phrase 'quite more' is incorrect; 'much more' is the proper quantifier for comparison. Also, adding commas improves readability, and 'so' connects the ideas better than 'and maybe' alone.

× I find it quite easier than wet weather to do anything.

✓ I find it quite easy to do anything compared to wet weather.

'Easier' is a comparative adjective and should be used with a comparison object. The original sentence misplaces 'quite' and uses 'easier' without a clear comparison. The correction clarifies the comparison and uses 'easy' appropriately.

× No, I'm not in the morning I'm just look the sky and I think today is the sunny or today is windy.

✓ No, in the morning I just look at the sky and think that today is sunny or windy.

The original sentence has missing prepositions ('look the sky' should be 'look at the sky'), incorrect verb forms ('I'm just look' should be 'I just look'), and awkward phrasing. The correction fixes these issues and improves sentence flow.

× I don't see the forecast and I rarely do that.

✓ I don't check the forecast and I rarely do that.

'See the forecast' is less appropriate than 'check the forecast' when referring to weather forecasts. The correction uses the proper verb-preposition combination.

× I'm just enjoy the day through the sky.

✓ I just enjoy the day by looking at the sky.

'I'm just enjoy' is incorrect verb form; it should be 'I just enjoy'. Also, 'through the sky' is not idiomatic; 'by looking at the sky' conveys the intended meaning.

× Well I think climate change has a fact to people health and even animals habitat because of the pollution and global warming is happen day by day and so that government should sold and implement some methods.

✓ Well, I think climate change has an effect on people's health and even animals' habitats because of pollution, and global warming is happening day by day, so the government should solve and implement some methods.

Multiple errors: 'has a fact' should be 'has an effect'; 'people health' should be 'people's health'; 'animals habitat' should be 'animals' habitats'; 'is happen' should be 'is happening'; 'sold' should be 'solve'. The correction addresses these grammar and vocabulary errors.

× Yes, I think about it sometimes I really want to go travel to a city that has a relaxing queue setting to relax like in the countryside or some village and I think it will be comfortable, more comfortable for.

✓ Yes, I think about it sometimes. I really want to travel to a city that has a relaxing quiet setting to relax, like in the countryside or some village, and I think it will be more comfortable.

Errors include run-on sentence, 'go travel' should be 'travel', 'queue setting' is incorrect and should be 'quiet setting', and the sentence ends abruptly with 'more comfortable for' without an object. The correction fixes these issues and improves clarity.