Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题，且有些句子重复和不连贯。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用更自然的句式。

例: The weather is sunny today, and I really enjoy sunny days because they make me feel happy and satisfied.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且最后一句话与前文内容不符。建议使用更准确的表达，避免无关内容。

例: I prefer hot weather because I feel uncomfortable in the cold. In hot weather, I can use the air conditioner to stay cool and enjoy ice cream, which makes me feel relaxed.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够具体。建议使用更准确的语法和具体的细节来支持观点。

例: I prefer wet weather because dry weather often makes my skin dry and uncomfortable. Wet weather helps keep my skin moisturized and makes me feel healthier.

提案: 回答较为完整，但句子结构可以更自然流畅。建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I usually check the weather forecast every morning to decide what to wear. For example, if it is going to rain, I choose waterproof shoes to keep my feet dry.

提案: 回答表达基本清晰，但用词和句式可以更自然，且内容可以更具体。建议丰富细节并使用更地道的表达。

例: In recent years, climate change has raised public awareness about environmental protection. It reminds us that human activities have caused significant damage, so we need to take immediate action to preserve our planet.

提案: 回答表达有些重复，且部分句子不够自然。建议使用更连贯的句子结构，并避免重复。

例: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates. For instance, I want to experience the desert, which is very dry compared to the wet climate of Shanghai. Exploring different environments helps me learn and grow.

× Today is sunny and the sun shines very well.

✓ Today is sunny and the sun is shining very brightly.

这里描述的是当前的天气状况，应该使用现在进行时来表达正在发生的动作，'shines'改为'is shining'，并且'adverb'应为'brightly'而非'well'。

× But maybe it is very hard.

✓ But maybe it is very hot.

这里的'hard'用词不当，应该用'hot'来描述天气的炎热。

× It bring me a lot of pressure.

✓ It brings me a lot of pressure.

主语是单数第三人称，谓语动词应加-s，'bring'改为'brings'。

× dry weather always make my skin feeling bad.

✓ dry weather always makes my skin feel bad.

主语是单数，谓语动词应加-s，'make'改为'makes'；'feeling'应改为动词原形'feel'。

× I like being to the desert.

✓ I like going to the desert.

'being to'用法错误，正确表达是'going to'，表示去某地。