Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复和矛盾的描述，并且注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

例: I live in Shenzhen, a city in southern China. The weather is usually sunny and warmer compared to other regions. It rarely rains, so we don't need to wear heavy clothes.

提案: 回答表达不流畅且有语法错误，建议使用更自然的表达方式，清晰说明原因，并避免重复。

例: I prefer cold weather because hot weather makes me feel stressed and nervous. When it's hot, I find it hard to concentrate and just want to stay in an air-conditioned room.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议完整表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明喜欢干燥天气的原因。

例: I prefer dry weather because it feels calm and relaxing. Also, dry weather helps my clothes dry faster, unlike wet weather which is inconvenient.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议直接回答问题，说明是否习惯查看天气预报，并给出具体频率和原因。

例: I usually don't check the weather forecast because I prefer to experience the weather naturally. However, sometimes I check it if I have outdoor plans.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，具体描述气候变化的影响。

例: I think climate change has caused summers to become hotter and winters to be warmer in my country. This makes it uncomfortable, and sometimes we don't see snow anymore.

提案: 回答表达不完整且有语法错误，建议清晰表达愿望并举具体例子，避免重复和不连贯。

例: Yes, I am eager to visit countries with different climates because climate influences culture. For example, Italy has a Mediterranean climate, which affects its lifestyle and traditions.

× I live in Shenzhen in our South city of China call and the weather is very sunny every day and the temperature is higher than the other regions in China.

✓ I live in Shenzhen, a southern city of China, and the weather is very sunny every day, and the temperature is higher than in other regions of China.

句中“in our South city of China call”表达不正确，应改为“a southern city of China”表示“一个中国南方的城市”。此外，“higher than the other regions in China”应改为“higher than in other regions of China”，介词使用错误。

× It's always raining and we don't need to put on so many heavy.

✓ It doesn't always rain, and we don't need to put on so many heavy clothes.

“It's always raining”与上下文不符，应改为“doesn't always rain”。“put on so many heavy”缺少名词，应补充“clothes”。

× I think I like cold weather more because in hot weather I will got very stressful and nervous.

✓ I think I like cold weather more because in hot weather I get very stressed and nervous.

“will got”时态错误，应改为一般现在时“get”，表示习惯性动作。

× I I find myself very concentrated because of the high temperature.

✓ I find it hard to concentrate because of the high temperature.

“find myself very concentrated”表达不自然，应改为“find it hard to concentrate”，更符合英语表达习惯。

× I want to be in the air conditioner just so I don't like.

✓ I want to be in the air-conditioned room because I don't like the heat.

“be in the air conditioner”表达错误，应改为“be in the air-conditioned room”。“just so I don't like”不完整，应补充原因。

× I think I I pray for dry weather because it's a it's a very calm and make me feel very free and relaxing.

✓ I think I prefer dry weather because it's very calm and makes me feel free and relaxed.

“pray for dry weather”用词错误，应为“prefer dry weather”。“make me feel very free and relaxing”中“relaxing”应改为“relaxed”，形容感受。

× Think of that wet weather. It can't make your clothes dry faster. It'll, it'll.

✓ I think wet weather can't make your clothes dry faster.

“Think of that wet weather”表达不自然，应改为“I think wet weather”。

× I don't have the habit of checking out the weather forecast because I just want to randomly feel the weather happened in the tomorrow.

✓ I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast because I just want to randomly feel the weather that will happen tomorrow.

“checking out the weather forecast”中“out”多余，应去掉。“happened in the tomorrow”时态和介词错误，应改为“will happen tomorrow”。

× I don't need to prepare for the tomorrow's weather because I always take.

✓ I don't need to prepare for tomorrow's weather because I always take it as it comes.

“the tomorrow's weather”中“the”多余，应去掉。句子不完整，补充完整表达。

× I find there are quite a factor of the climate change in my country.

✓ I find there are quite a few factors of climate change in my country.

“quite a factor”用词错误，应为“quite a few factors”，表示“相当多的因素”。

× For example, summer will become more hotter in future.

✓ For example, summer will become hotter in the future.

“more hotter”是比较级重复，应去掉“more”，只用“hotter”。

× I think I can't bear it.

✓ I think I can't bear it.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× I just want to stay in the room and the winter become warmer and we don't consider the snow.

✓ I just want to stay in the room. The winter becomes warmer, and we don't get much snow.

“the winter become warmer”主谓不一致，应改为“becomes”。“we don't consider the snow”表达不清，应改为“we don't get much snow”。

× Yes, I'm very, I'm very eager to see other country which has our different climates because I want to express the different culture caused by different climate.

✓ Yes, I'm very eager to see other countries which have different climates because I want to experience the different cultures caused by different climates.

“other country”应为复数“other countries”。“has our different climates”错误，应为“have different climates”。“express the different culture”应为“experience the different cultures”。

× For example, in Italy, which has a western climate, has white.

✓ For example, Italy, which has a western climate, has white winters.

句子不完整，补充“winters”使句子完整。