Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，且句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地描述天气状况，避免重复和语法错误。

例: I live in Hangzhou, where the weather is quite extreme. Summers are very hot, which makes it difficult for me to stay outside for long periods.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议直接表达偏好并给出具体原因，句子结构要完整。

例: I prefer cold weather because it creates a cozy atmosphere, and I enjoy relaxing on my bed during chilly days.

提案: 回答中有重复且表达不够自然。建议使用更多连贯的句子，具体说明为什么喜欢干燥天气。

例: I prefer dry weather because it feels more comfortable. Heavy rain often prevents me from going outside, which is inconvenient.

提案: 回答不够清晰，逻辑混乱。建议直接回答是否习惯查看天气预报，并说明原因，句子要连贯。

例: No, I usually don't check the weather forecast because my grandparents often remind me about the weather, so I rely on them.

提案: 回答内容较好，但表达不够流畅，有语法错误。建议使用更准确的词汇和连贯的句子表达观点。

例: In recent years, the weather has become more unpredictable, which negatively affects agriculture because plants do not receive enough water at the right times.

提案: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊。建议清晰表达愿望并说明原因，避免断句和词汇错误。

例: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates because I find Hangzhou's weather too hot and want to experience cooler places.

× I live in Hangzhou and the weather in Hangzhou is very crazy because it's very hot in the summer and which make me happen can, cannot stand and cannot outside.

✓ I live in Hangzhou and the weather in Hangzhou is very crazy because it's very hot in the summer and which makes me happy, cannot stand it, and cannot go outside.

这里的主语是单数"weather"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"makes"，而不是复数"make"。此外，句子中"cannot stand"后应加宾语"it"，"cannot outside"应改为"cannot go outside"，使表达完整。

× I live in Hangzhou and the weather in Hangzhou is very crazy because it's very hot in the summer and which make me happen can, cannot stand and cannot outside.

✓ I live in Hangzhou and the weather in Hangzhou is very crazy because it's very hot in the summer and which makes me happy, cannot stand it, and cannot go outside.

主语"weather"是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"makes"，而不是复数"make"。

× I live in Hangzhou and the weather in Hangzhou is very crazy because it's very hot in the summer and which make me happen can, cannot stand and cannot outside.

✓ I live in Hangzhou and the weather in Hangzhou is very crazy because it's very hot in the summer and which makes me happy, cannot stand it, and cannot go outside.

"happen"用错，应为形容词"happy"来表达情感。

× I live in Hangzhou and the weather in Hangzhou is very crazy because it's very hot in the summer and which make me happen can, cannot stand and cannot outside.

✓ I live in Hangzhou and the weather in Hangzhou is very crazy because it's very hot in the summer and which makes me happy, cannot stand it, and cannot go outside.

"cannot outside"缺少动词，应加动词"go"，构成正确的短语"cannot go outside"。

× Because I prefer the cold weather because it's it's I can lay on my bed and with it's cozy atmosphere.

✓ Because I prefer the cold weather since I can lie on my bed and enjoy its cozy atmosphere.

"lay"是及物动词，表示放置，应使用不及物动词"lie"表示躺。"it's"重复且用法不当，应改为"its"表示所有格。

× Because I prefer the cold weather because it's it's I can lay on my bed and with it's cozy atmosphere.

✓ Because I prefer the cold weather since I can lie on my bed and enjoy its cozy atmosphere.

"with it's cozy atmosphere"结构不完整，应改为"enjoy its cozy atmosphere"，使表达更自然。

× Because I prefer the cold weather because it's it's I can lay on my bed and with it's cozy atmosphere.

✓ I prefer the cold weather because I can lie on my bed and enjoy its cozy atmosphere.

句首重复使用"Because"导致句子结构不完整，应去掉第一个"Because"使句子通顺。

× Wet weather will make me uncomfortable and when it's rain heavily it will influence me to get outside.

✓ Wet weather makes me uncomfortable, and when it rains heavily, it affects my ability to go outside.

"when it's rain heavily"中"rain"应为动词第三人称单数形式"rains"。"influence me to get outside"表达不当，应改为"affects my ability to go outside"。

× Wet weather will make me uncomfortable and when it's rain heavily it will influence me to get outside.

✓ Wet weather makes me uncomfortable, and when it rains heavily, it affects my ability to go outside.

描述习惯性事实时应使用一般现在时，而非将来时。

× No, I don't like to watch the weather forecast because my grandparents always remind me the weather like so I need to check it for myself.

✓ No, I don't like to watch the weather forecast because my grandparents always remind me about the weather, so I need to check it for myself.

"remind me the weather like"表达不完整，应加介词"about"，并调整句子结构使其通顺。

× No, I don't like to watch the weather forecast because my grandparents always remind me the weather like so I need to check it for myself.

✓ No, I don't like to watch the weather forecast because my grandparents always remind me about the weather, so I need to check it for myself.

"remind"后应接介词"about"引出提醒的内容。

× The weather in recent years is more unpredicted, so the agriculture suffers a lot since they can't since the plants cannot get enough water in the proper time.

✓ The weather in recent years is more unpredictable, so agriculture suffers a lot since the plants cannot get enough water at the proper time.

"agriculture"作为不可数名词，不加冠词。"unpredicted"应为形容词"unpredictable"。

× The weather in recent years is more unpredicted, so the agriculture suffers a lot since they can't since the plants cannot get enough water in the proper time.

✓ The weather in recent years is more unpredictable, so agriculture suffers a lot since the plants cannot get enough water at the proper time.

"unpredicted"是过去分词，形容天气应使用形容词"unpredictable"。

× The weather in recent years is more unpredicted, so the agriculture suffers a lot since they can't since the plants cannot get enough water in the proper time.

✓ The weather in recent years is more unpredictable, so agriculture suffers a lot since the plants cannot get enough water at the proper time.

"they"指代不明确，应去掉。

× The weather in recent years is more unpredicted, so the agriculture suffers a lot since they can't since the plants cannot get enough water in the proper time.

✓ The weather in recent years is more unpredictable, so agriculture suffers a lot since the plants cannot get enough water at the proper time.

"in the proper time"应改为"at the proper time"，表示在适当的时间点。

× Yes, I would love to. It will be an extreme. Travel. I think other cities which have the color climate because I think live in Hangzhou is still hot.

✓ Yes, I would love to. It will be an extreme travel experience. I think other cities have a cooler climate because I think living in Hangzhou is still hot.

句子断裂，"extreme. Travel."应合并为"extreme travel experience"。"color climate"应为"cooler climate"。"I think live in Hangzhou"缺主语，应改为"I think living in Hangzhou"。