Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Améliorez la grammaire et la structure de la phrase pour qu'elle soit plus naturelle et fluide. Par exemple, utilisez le présent simple correctement et évitez les erreurs comme "it rain". Ajoutez aussi un peu plus de détails spécifiques.

例: The weather where I live is usually very cloudy, and it rains quite often, so I always carry an umbrella with me.

提案: Corrigez la grammaire et la formulation pour plus de clarté et naturel. Par exemple, utilisez "easier" au lieu de "more easy" et ajoutez une raison plus développée pour enrichir la réponse.

例: I prefer cold weather because I have many warm clothes, and I find it easier to stay comfortable in the cold than in the heat.

提案: Clarifiez votre réponse et corrigez les erreurs grammaticales. Expliquez clairement votre préférence entre sec et humide, et utilisez des phrases complètes et cohérentes.

例: I prefer dry weather because it is easier to dress warmly and stay comfortable without worrying about my jacket getting wet.

提案: Améliorez la structure de la phrase et la clarté. Expliquez clairement votre habitude et donnez une raison précise, en évitant les répétitions inutiles.

例: No, I don't usually check the weather forecast because I used to check it before, but it was often inaccurate.

提案: Clarifiez vos idées et utilisez un vocabulaire plus précis. Expliquez clairement les effets du changement climatique avec des exemples spécifiques et corrigez la grammaire.

例: I think climate change has caused many problems recently, such as affecting food production and agriculture due to increased industrial activities.

提案: Corrigez la grammaire et la structure des phrases. Utilisez le temps correct et développez votre réponse avec des raisons précises.

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates from mine because I want to experience very cold weather, like in Montreal.

× The weather like where I live is really cloudy and it rain a lot, so I need to always have with me an umbrella.

✓ The weather where I live is really cloudy and it rains a lot, so I always need to have an umbrella with me.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'The weather' to form a correct 'there be' structure. Also, 'it rain' should be 'it rains' to agree with the third person singular subject. The phrase 'have with me an umbrella' is awkward; the correct order is 'have an umbrella with me'.

× The weather like where I live is really cloudy and it rain a lot, so I need to always have with me an umbrella.

✓ The weather where I live is really cloudy and it rains a lot, so I always need to have an umbrella with me.

The verb 'rain' must be conjugated as 'rains' to agree with the third person singular subject 'it'.

× The weather like where I live is really cloudy and it rain a lot, so I need to always have with me an umbrella.

✓ The weather where I live is really cloudy and it rains a lot, so I always need to have an umbrella with me.

The adverb 'always' should be placed before the main verb 'need' for correct adverb placement in English.

× I really prefer cold weather because I have more warm clothes so it's more easy for me.

✓ I really prefer cold weather because I have more warm clothes so it's easier for me.

The phrase 'more easy' is incorrect; the comparative form of 'easy' is 'easier'. Also, 'it's' is correct as it refers to 'it is'.

× I preferred Why because I found it easier to dress warmly and stay comfortable with a jacket that will be wet.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I find it easier to dress warmly and stay comfortable with a jacket that will not be wet.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'preferred' and 'found' when the question is about preference in general, so present tense 'prefer' and 'find' should be used. Also, 'Why' is misplaced and should be removed. The phrase 'a jacket that will be wet' contradicts the preference for dry weather; it should be 'a jacket that will not be wet'.

× I preferred Why because I found it easier to dress warmly and stay comfortable with a jacket that will be wet.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I find it easier to dress warmly and stay comfortable with a jacket that will not be wet.

The word 'Why' is incorrectly used as a conjunction here and should be removed for clarity.

× Absolutely not, because I have the habit before to check the forecast weather forecast and it was always wrong.

✓ Absolutely not, because I used to check the weather forecast before and it was always wrong.

The phrase 'have the habit before to check' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'used to check'. Also, 'forecast weather forecast' is redundant; 'weather forecast' suffices.

× Absolutely not, because I have the habit before to check the forecast weather forecast and it was always wrong.

✓ Absolutely not, because I used to check the weather forecast before and it was always wrong.

The sentence refers to a past habit, so the past tense 'used to check' is appropriate instead of 'have the habit before to check'.

× I think it has a lot of change in recent years because we are more mechanical, so it's affect the feeds and the agriculture.

✓ I think there have been a lot of changes in recent years because we are more mechanical, so it affects the fields and agriculture.

The phrase 'it has a lot of change' is incorrect; 'there have been a lot of changes' is correct to indicate multiple changes over time. 'It's affect' should be 'it affects' to agree with the singular subject. 'Feeds' is incorrect in this context; 'fields' is the correct word.

× I think it has a lot of change in recent years because we are more mechanical, so it's affect the feeds and the agriculture.

✓ I think there have been a lot of changes in recent years because we are more mechanical, so it affects the fields and agriculture.

The sentence needs 'there have been' to correctly express the existence of multiple changes over time.

× I think it has a lot of change in recent years because we are more mechanical, so it's affect the feeds and the agriculture.

✓ I think there have been a lot of changes in recent years because we are more mechanical, so it affects the fields and agriculture.

The verb 'affect' must be conjugated as 'affects' to agree with the third person singular subject 'it'.

× Yes, I want to visit other cities that had different climate but where I live because I want to experience really cold weather like in Montreal.

✓ Yes, I want to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because I want to experience really cold weather like in Montreal.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'had' when referring to a general fact; present tense 'have' is correct. Also, 'different climate but where I live' is incorrect; it should be 'different climates from where I live'.

× Yes, I want to visit other cities that had different climate but where I live because I want to experience really cold weather like in Montreal.

✓ Yes, I want to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because I want to experience really cold weather like in Montreal.

The noun 'climate' should be plural 'climates' to agree with the plural subject 'cities'.