Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: I like sunny days because they make me feel happy and energetic.

提案: 回答较为简单，建议增加连接词使句子更连贯，并丰富细节描述。

例: I prefer hot weather because I can enjoy eating ice cream and go swimming, which are both very refreshing activities.

提案: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时增加具体细节。

例: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for my daily activities; for example, I can easily go outside to play with my friends without worrying about rain.

提案: 回答过于简短，缺乏细节和时间频率描述，建议补充具体的时间和频率信息。

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving home to plan my day accordingly.

提案: 回答内容较好，但表达略显重复，建议使用更多具体例子和多样词汇。

例: I believe climate change has caused severe effects recently, such as extreme weather events and rising sea levels, which threaten both the environment and human communities globally.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，建议简化句子并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: No, I wouldn't like to visit cities with different climates because I am used to and enjoy the climate in my own city.

× I like sunny day because it's sunny day.

✓ I like sunny days because it's a sunny day.

这里'sunny day'应该用复数形式'sunny days'来表示一般的天气情况，同时第二个'sunny day'前需要加不定冠词'a'，表示特定的一天。

× It can makes me, it can make me feel delighted.

✓ It can make me feel delighted.

情态动词can后面动词用原形，不能加-s。原句中'makes'错误，应改为'make'。

× I get used to my get used to the climates in my city and I like the climate in my city.

✓ I am used to the climate in my city and I like the climate in my city.

'get used to'重复且用法不当，表达习惯应使用被动结构'am used to'，且'climates'应为单数形式'climate'，因为指的是自己所在城市的气候。