Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时句子结构不够连贯，有些句子不完整，且重复使用了“quite”。建议注意句子完整性和避免重复表达。

例: I live in Hangzhou, which has a monsoon climate characterized by heavy rainfall. Although it's located in southern China, summers are hot while winters can be quite cold.

提案: 表达不够正式，使用了口语化词汇“kinda like a torture”，建议使用更正式和准确的表达。

例: I prefer cold weather because I can wear more layers to keep warm, whereas hot weather makes it uncomfortable to go outside.

提案: 句子结构不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达不够准确。建议简化句子并注意语法。

例: I prefer dry weather because I currently live in a humid area with frequent rain, and I think dry weather would offer a different lifestyle.

提案: 回答较为完整，但可以使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every evening so that I can prepare my schedule and choose appropriate clothes for the next day.

提案: 内容较丰富，但句子稍显冗长，建议适当分句并使用连接词。

例: I believe global warming is the most significant change caused by climate change. It leads to rising sea levels and natural disasters like hurricanes, which harm both people and the environment.

提案: 回答清晰，但可以增加连接词使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy exploring various lifestyles and landscapes.

× Although it is in the South section of China.

✓ Although it is in the southern part of China,

该句为不完整句，缺少主句，导致句子结构错误。应将其改为完整的复合句，例如在句尾加逗号并连接后文。

× It has a monsoon climate with lots of rains.

✓ It has a monsoon climate with lots of rain.

rain是不可数名词，不能用复数形式rains，应该用单数形式rain。

× The summer is hot and winter is quite quite cold.

✓ The summer is hot and the winter is quite cold.

重复使用quite quite是多余的，应去掉一个；另外，winter前缺少定冠词the。

× I prefer cold weather because in winter I can add my clothes, but in the summer going out is kinda like a torture.

✓ I prefer cold weather because in winter I can add my clothes, but in the summer going out is kind of like torture.

短语'add my clothes'用法不当，应该用'wear more clothes'；'kinda'是口语缩写，正式表达应为'kind of'；'a torture'中torture不可数，前面不加冠词。

× I prefer dry weather because I am now living in a humid place and I find it is rainy too much times and maybe in dry weather I could find a different lifestyle.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I am now living in a humid place and I find it rains too many times, and maybe in dry weather I could find a different lifestyle.

'it is rainy too much times'表达不正确，应改为'it rains too many times'，'too many times'表示次数过多。

× Yes, I often check the weather forecast in the evening every day because I like to prepare for tomorrow's schedules and clothes.

✓ Yes, I often check the weather forecast every evening because I like to prepare for tomorrow's schedule and clothes.

'in the evening every day'表达不自然，改为'every evening'更合适；'schedules'应为单数'schedule'，表示一天的安排。

× I think the biggest change is the global warming and it can result in the rise of sea level and some disasters like hurricanes, which can be harmful to both people and the planet's environment.

✓ I think the biggest change is global warming and it can result in the rise of sea levels and some disasters like hurricanes, which can be harmful to both people and the planet's environment.

'the global warming'中不需要定冠词'the'；'sea level'应为复数'sea levels'，表示海平面上升的多个方面。