Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating the current weather and general climate, avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: Currently, it is the rainy season here, so the weather is humid and wet. However, for most of the year, the climate is very hot, lasting more than six months.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains some awkward phrasing and repetition. Try to express your preference clearly and use linking words to explain why you prefer spring weather.

例: I don't particularly prefer very cold or very hot weather. Instead, I like spring weather because it is neither too hot nor too cold, which feels very comfortable.

提案: Your answer has several pronunciation and grammatical errors, and some sentences are unclear. Try to speak clearly, use correct vocabulary, and link your ideas logically to explain your preference.

例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather has a lot of humidity, which makes me feel uncomfortable and unhappy. Also, in dry weather, I can enjoy outdoor sports and have fun outings.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting tense consistency and using linking words for coherence. Also, avoid redundancy and make your sentences more natural.

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning when I wake up and again before going out. This helps me stay updated and plan my day accordingly.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to complete your thoughts with specific details and use linking words to explain the effects of climate change clearly and logically.

例: I believe climate change has caused many negative effects recently. For example, global warming has increased, leading to extreme weather conditions and harming the environment.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly, use correct grammar, and link your sentences logically to explain your reasons.

例: Yes, I definitely want to visit cities with different climates because I am bored of the climate where I live. I don't like humid and wet weather, so I would like to go to a country with a drier climate.

× All right now it is rainy season, but it is kind of humid and rainy, but it is too you made.

✓ All right, now it is the rainy season, and it is kind of humid and rainy, but it is too humid.

The phrase 'too you made' is incorrect and seems to be a mishearing or typo. The intended meaning is likely 'too humid'. Also, 'rainy season' requires the definite article 'the'.

× But generally in my country the weather is very hot almost for more than six months.

✓ But generally, in my country, the weather is very hot for almost more than six months.

The phrase 'almost for more than six months' is awkward. 'Almost' and 'more than' together are contradictory. The correct phrase is 'for almost more than six months' or better 'for more than six months'. Also, commas are needed for clarity.

× I do not have any spare reference of whether whether it is a cold weather or hot weather.

✓ I do not have any strong preference for whether it is cold weather or hot weather.

The phrase 'spare reference' is incorrect; 'strong preference' is appropriate. Also, 'a cold weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'.

× I would like to have a spring weather which is not too hot and not too cold.

✓ I would like to have spring weather which is not too hot and not too cold.

'Weather' is uncountable and does not take the article 'a'.

× It will be a cool weather.

✓ It will be cool weather.

Again, 'weather' is uncountable and does not take the article 'a'.

× I prefer driver because I feel in wet weather there is lot of humidity which makes my mode clumsy and not happy.

✓ I prefer drier weather because I feel in wet weather there is a lot of humidity which makes my mood clumsy and unhappy.

'Driver' should be 'drier' (comparative adjective). 'Lot of humidity' needs the article 'a lot of'. 'Mode' is a typo for 'mood'. 'Not happy' is better expressed as 'unhappy'.

× I also prefer drive weatherby cause in drive whether I can go out to play my outdoor sports and have a fun nice outing.

✓ I also prefer dry weather because in dry weather I can go out to play my outdoor sports and have a nice fun outing.

'Drive weatherby' and 'drive whether' are incorrect; should be 'dry weather'. 'Cause' should be 'because'. 'A fun nice outing' is better as 'a nice fun outing'.

× I checked the weather forecast every morning when I wake up and usually before when I go out at any place.

✓ I check the weather forecast every morning when I wake up and usually before I go out anywhere.

The action is habitual, so present tense 'check' is appropriate instead of past 'checked'. 'At any place' is better expressed as 'anywhere'.

× Checking the weather keeps me updated and plan my schedule accordingly.

✓ Checking the weather keeps me updated and helps me plan my schedule accordingly.

The sentence lacks a verb for 'plan'; adding 'helps me' corrects the structure.

× It has had adverse effects on the weather conditions and the atmosphere of our of our all, the most challenging problem is global warming, which is increasing due to.

✓ It has had adverse effects on the weather conditions and the atmosphere overall. The most challenging problem is global warming, which is increasing due to human activities.

The sentence is incomplete and repetitive ('of our of our all'). It needs to be split into two sentences and completed for clarity.

× Yes, I surely want to visit different cities to experience knew climate.

✓ Yes, I surely want to visit different cities to experience new climates.

'Knew' is a typo for 'new'. 'Climate' should be plural 'climates' when referring to different types.

× As an very bored of the climate where I leave.

✓ I am very bored of the climate where I live.

The phrase 'As an very bored' is incorrect; it should be 'I am very bored'. 'Leave' is a typo for 'live'.

× I'd really do not like humid weather and wet weather so would like to go to any other country.

✓ I really do not like humid and wet weather, so I would like to go to another country.

'I'd really do not like' is incorrect; 'I really do not like' is correct. 'Any other country' is better as 'another country' in this context.