Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ chính xác hơn. Nên dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn về thời tiết từng mùa.

例: The weather where I live changes throughout the year. For instance, in spring, it is usually cool and pleasant, while in summer, it becomes very hot and dry.

提案: Cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn. Nên sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn về sở thích cá nhân.

例: I definitely prefer cold weather because I find it more pleasant. For example, when it's cold, I feel more energetic and motivated to exercise regularly.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Cần diễn đạt tự nhiên, tránh lặp từ và cung cấp lý do cụ thể hơn cho sở thích của mình.

例: I prefer dry weather because I dislike feeling wet and uncomfortable. For example, in dry weather, I can stay fresh and active throughout the day.

提案: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Nên sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp tần suất cụ thể khi kiểm tra dự báo thời tiết.

例: I don't check the weather forecast regularly, but I do it sometimes. For example, I usually check it on special occasions, like the first day of school, to make sure the weather is nice for going out.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi nghiêm trọng về ngữ pháp và từ vựng, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Cần sử dụng từ vựng chính xác, câu rõ ràng và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về tác động của biến đổi khí hậu.

例: Climate change has caused many negative effects on the environment and people. For example, it has led to more natural disasters like floods and droughts, which harm communities and wildlife.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác. Cần diễn đạt tự nhiên, rõ ràng và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về nơi muốn đến và lý do.

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to visit Canada because it has cold and cool weather, which I find very refreshing and enjoyable.

× in spring my neighborhood tend to be a little bit cold and cool

✓ in spring my neighborhood tends to be a little bit cold and cool

The subject 'my neighborhood' is singular, so the verb should be 'tends' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.

× can help me less lazy for example

✓ can help me be less lazy, for example

The verb 'help' should be followed by the base form 'be' when used with 'can help me'. The phrase 'less lazy' needs the verb 'be' to be grammatically correct.

× I usually exercise in there

✓ I usually exercise there

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary before 'there'. 'Exercise there' is the correct phrase to indicate location.

× my neighborhood tend to be a little bit cold and cool

✓ my neighborhood tends to be a little bit cold and cool

The singular noun 'neighborhood' requires the singular verb 'tends' for subject-verb agreement.

× my body can can be a dry and I keep

✓ my body can be dry and I stay comfortable

The phrase 'can can be a dry' is incorrect; 'can be dry' is correct. Also, 'I keep' is incomplete and unclear; 'I stay comfortable' clarifies the meaning.

× I'm not really in the habit of checking the weather forecast to sometimes

✓ I'm not really in the habit of checking the weather forecast, only sometimes

The original sentence has awkward structure and misplaced 'to sometimes'. The correction clarifies the meaning and improves sentence flow.

× I usually check the focus on special occasion like the day back to school or intended to ensure that the weather is beautiful in app for me to go out

✓ I usually check the forecast on special occasions like the day I go back to school or when I intend to ensure that the weather is good for me to go out

The phrase 'check the focus on special occasion' is incorrect; it should be 'check the forecast on special occasions'. Also, 'the day back to school' needs 'I go' for clarity. 'Beautiful in app' is unclear and corrected to 'good for me to go out'.

× Chrome change in recent years have so many negative impact on environment and humans

✓ Climate change in recent years has so many negative impacts on the environment and humans

'Climate change' is singular, so the verb should be 'has'. 'Impact' should be plural 'impacts' to agree with 'so many'. Also, 'environment' needs the definite article 'the'.

× climate change course so many plot in katastrophy thereby people lies result in a bad condition

✓ climate change causes so many problems and catastrophes, thereby people suffer resulting in bad conditions

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'course' should be 'causes'; 'plot in katastrophy' is incorrect and replaced with 'problems and catastrophes'; 'people lies result' is incorrect and replaced with 'people suffer resulting'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× as a code and the sea at I'd like to visit countries having a cold or cool weather of For example, career is my favorite country to visit as it is covered by code and cool weather Wichita which helps me more app

✓ As I like cold and sea climates, I'd like to visit countries with cold or cool weather. For example, Korea is my favorite country to visit as it has cold and cool weather, which helps me feel better

The original sentence contains many errors: 'code' should be 'cold'; 'career' should be 'Korea'; 'covered by code and cool weather Wichita' is unclear and corrected to 'has cold and cool weather'; 'helps me more app' is unclear and corrected to 'helps me feel better'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.