Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，且部分词汇使用不准确。建议简化表达，避免重复，使用更自然的句式，并注意大小写和拼写。

例: I live in eastern China, where we have four distinct seasons. Winters are cold and snowy, while summers are warm and sunny. I really enjoy living here because the weather is quite pleasant throughout the year.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“hot weathers”和“comfortable closing”。建议使用正确的单数形式和更准确的词汇，表达更清晰。

例: Personally, I prefer hot weather because I can wear light clothes comfortably. Also, it's great to go to the beach and swim during the warm seasons.

提案: 回答表达混乱，重复且不连贯。建议理清思路，避免重复，使用连词使句子更流畅，并准确表达喜好和原因。

例: It's hard to choose, but I prefer wet weather because the sound of rain helps me relax and focus on my studies.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，如“to I checked”，“live my homes”，“MM Brela”。建议使用正确时态和拼写，表达更自然。

例: To be honest, I check the weather forecast almost every day because it's important to know the weather changes, especially before I leave my home. This helps me decide if I need to take an umbrella.

提案: 回答不连贯且含糊，语法和词汇错误较多。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，使用正确词汇描述气候变化的影响。

例: I'm not an expert, but I think climate change has caused more extreme weather events like typhoons and floods around the world. We should take action to protect the environment.

提案: 回答表达不清，语法错误多，句子不完整。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达不喜欢极端气候的原因。

例: I wouldn't like to visit cities with very different climates because I find it hard to adapt to extreme weather, whether it's too hot or too dry.

× Well, personally speaking I prefer hot weathers.

✓ Well, personally speaking I prefer hot weather.

“weather”是不可数名词，不能加复数形式“weathers”。应使用单数形式。

× This is because I can wear light in the comfortable closing in the seasons and I think it will be fantastic to go to the beach and go swimming in the season like this.

✓ This is because I can wear light and comfortable clothes in the season, and I think it will be fantastic to go to the beach and go swimming in a season like this.

“wear light in the comfortable closing”表达不正确，应为“wear light and comfortable clothes”。“closing”应为“clothes”。

× I shouldn't know whether I need to take the MM Brela today.

✓ I should know whether I need to take the umbrella today.

“umbrella”是可数名词，且拼写错误，应为“umbrella”。“MM Brela”是错误拼写。

× Not really, this is because I am not comfortable with extreme weathers an which is definitely different from the weather where I live.

✓ Not really, this is because I am not comfortable with extreme weather, which is definitely different from the weather where I live.

“weather”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“weathers”。

× Actually, it's hard to say if I had to choose, I prefer I prefer what to others because I think it will be comfortable to do to focus on my study, listening their son of rain, which is really relaxed and calming.

✓ Actually, it's hard to say. If I had to choose, I prefer wet weather to others because I think it will be comfortable to focus on my study, listening to the sound of rain, which is really relaxing and calming.

“prefer I prefer what to others”表达混乱，应为“prefer wet weather to others”。“listening their son of rain”应为“listening to the sound of rain”。“relaxed”应为“relaxing”。

× But to be honest to I checked the weather forecast almost every day because I think it is very important for me to know the weather changes, especially before I live my homes.

✓ But to be honest, I check the weather forecast almost every day because I think it is very important for me to know the weather changes, especially before I leave my home.

“checked”用过去时不符合语境，应为一般现在时“check”。“live my homes”应为“leave my home”。

× Actually, I am not the expert English food that's from personally speaking.

✓ Actually, I am not an expert, but personally speaking,

句子结构混乱，“English food that's from”无意义，应改为“an expert, but personally speaking,”。

× I think it I think it may be the environmental changes on, you know, they're more animal extreme weathers or around the world like typhoon, floods and earthquakes.

✓ I think it may be environmental changes, you know, there are more and more extreme weather events around the world like typhoons, floods and earthquakes.

“changes on”应为“changes”。“they're more animal extreme weathers”表达错误，应为“there are more and more extreme weather events”。

× King. I think it is difficult for me to adapt to see whether which is. Maybe too hard or too dry?

✓ I think it is difficult for me to adapt to the weather, which may be too hot or too dry.

“adapt to see whether which is”表达错误，应为“adapt to the weather”。“too hard”应为“too hot”。