Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về thời tiết hiện tại và các mùa trong năm.

例: Right now, the weather is sunny but sometimes it rains. In Vietnam, there are only two seasons: the rainy season and the dry season. We don't have snow or other types of weather.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích thời tiết lạnh hoặc nóng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối.

例: I prefer cold weather because I can wear warm clothes like coats and jackets. Hot weather makes me feel uncomfortable and sometimes angry because it is hard to cool down.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai. Bạn nên nói trực tiếp về sở thích của mình và giải thích lý do cụ thể, sử dụng từ nối để câu mạch lạc.

例: I prefer dry weather because it is usually sunny. When it is sunny, I can dry my clothes easily. Wet weather is inconvenient because I cannot go outside and clothes take longer to dry.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Hãy nói về thói quen của bạn một cách cụ thể và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh.

例: I don't usually check the weather forecast because it is not very accurate in Vietnam. However, sometimes I check it when I have to travel far from my city or country to plan my day well.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và có nội dung cụ thể hơn về ảnh hưởng của biến đổi khí hậu. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để diễn đạt ý kiến của mình.

例: In recent years, climate change has caused more severe storms and heavy rain in my country. This has led to flooding and damage to homes and crops.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh nói lắp hoặc câu không hoàn chỉnh. Hãy nói rõ bạn có muốn đến những thành phố có khí hậu khác không và giải thích lý do.

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I have been to Hanoi, which has unpredictable weather compared to Ho Chi Minh City where I live.

× Right now is sunny but is in disease and's rain.

✓ Right now it is sunny but it is cloudy and raining.

The sentence lacks the subject 'it' before the verbs 'is' and 'is raining'. In English, weather expressions require 'it' as the subject. Also, 'in disease' is incorrect; likely intended 'cloudy'. Use 'it is' for weather descriptions.

× Yeah, in Vietnam there are just two season.

✓ Yeah, in Vietnam there are just two seasons.

The noun 'season' should be plural 'seasons' because it refers to two distinct periods. When referring to more than one, use the plural form.

× Two weather yeah is rainy and sunny is don't have snowy or.

✓ The two types of weather are rainy and sunny; there is no snow or other types.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. It needs a clear subject and verb to convey the meaning. 'Is don't have snowy or' is incorrect; it should be 'there is no snow or other types'.

× Something else is so. Quarry.

✓ There is nothing else.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Quarry' is likely a mispronunciation or error. The intended meaning is probably 'There is nothing else' or 'No other types'.

× Maybe I can trim water but is not really work is so hard and make me feels really angry sometime.

✓ Maybe I can drink water but it doesn't really work; it is very hard and sometimes makes me feel really angry.

'Trim water' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'drink'. Also, 'is not really work' should be 'doesn't really work'. The sentence needs proper subject-verb agreement and modal verb usage.

× I re ferd try weather because when I try weather Mens sunny right and when sunny I can try for my clothes so easy and when what's weather is so difficult to do that and it is not really convenient.

✓ I prefer dry weather because when it is dry, it means sunny, right? And when it is sunny, I can dry my clothes easily, but when the weather is wet, it is difficult to do that and it is not really convenient.

'Re ferd' should be 'prefer'. 'Try weather' should be 'dry weather'. 'Mens' should be 'means'. 'Try for my clothes' should be 'dry my clothes'. The sentence has multiple errors in word choice and singular/plural forms.

× And I can't go outside to yes.

✓ And I can't go outside, yes.

The phrase 'to yes' is incorrect and unnecessary. The sentence should end after 'outside' with a comma before 'yes' if used as confirmation.

× Aye. Don't have a habit of checking the weather? Because in Vietnam is so is not work.

✓ No, I don't have a habit of checking the weather because in Vietnam it doesn't work well.

'Aye' is informal and unclear here. The sentence lacks subject 'I' and proper verb forms. 'Is so is not work' is incorrect; it should be 'it doesn't work well'.

× Maybe Sometimes I check it when I have to go far away from my CD or my country.

✓ Maybe sometimes I check it when I have to go far away from my city or my country.

'CD' is likely a typo for 'city'. Also, 'Sometimes' should not be capitalized mid-sentence. The sentence needs correction for clarity and proper nouns.

× I don't know why but in my country recent years. Is how it has also. Horrigan. And the rain so hard.

✓ I don't know why, but in my country in recent years, there have been hurricanes and very heavy rain.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect verb forms. 'Is how it has also' and 'Horrigan' are incorrect. The correct present perfect tense 'there have been' is needed to describe recent events.

× I don't know why, but maybe it's because. Could I have some?

✓ I don't know why, but maybe it's because of climate change.

'Could I have some?' is unrelated and incorrect here. The sentence should provide a possible reason for the weather changes, such as 'because of climate change'.

× Is so difficult to answer it, but in Hanoi the weather is so unpredictable like and send him running.

✓ It is so difficult to answer, but in Hanoi the weather is very unpredictable, like sudden rain.

The sentence lacks a subject at the beginning and contains unclear phrases like 'send him running'. It needs restructuring for clarity and correct vocabulary.